{reviewid: 2780045, reviewer: 'WillowDragon98'}
4th April 2013:
great story wish it had been longer though! It could have had so much more depth, as well as story line and character development potential! overall great short story though!
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{reviewid: 2620857, reviewer: 'Fawks5'}
26th November 2011:
Oh my god! I loved the heck out of it! The plot was brilliant! Everything was fantastic! You are truely an amazing author. I hope you continue to write!
If there was something higher that a 10/10, I would totally click it!
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{reviewid: 2210608, reviewer: 'GinnyWeasley_13'}
5th September 2009:
This was absolutely fantastic! I loved the mystery with the Red Mask and everything. You're definately my favourite J/L author.
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{reviewid: 1967903, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
19th October 2008:
OH MY GOSH!!
LOVED IT
awesome storyyy
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{reviewid: 1878676, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
although i prefer several of your other stories, i really liked where you went with this one.
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{reviewid: 1878670, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
nicely done with the suspense
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{reviewid: 1878661, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
intriguing plot line
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{reviewid: 1878656, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
ach, open your eyes lily! good chapter again though.
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{reviewid: 1878646, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
nicely written chapter, i don't hold much hope for sydney's survival now though; everytime i read a story where sirius gets a girlfriend, she is inevitably killed off!!
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{reviewid: 1878630, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
hmm, who is behind the red mask? and seeing as sirius & sydney appear to be the male/female equivalent of each other.?!
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{reviewid: 1878623, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
love the idea of a masquerade ball, nice choice
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{reviewid: 1878619, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
27th March 2008:
good beginning chapter!
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{reviewid: 1717187, reviewer: 'hermione119'}
19th November 2007:
WONDERFUL
ESPECIALLY WHEN LILLY COMES TO KNOW WHO IS UNDER THE MASK
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{reviewid: 1706207, reviewer: 'EvansPotter'}
10th November 2007:
i loved this story. it's written beautifully. i loved the idea of a mask. it was wonderful. i enjoyed. i loved james potter. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1483008, reviewer: 'itskodagosh'}
26th June 2007:
First off this is an absolutely amazing story. I love all of your writing, but this fic was just beyond awesome.
Second of all your info at the top of your site says that your stories are continued elsewhere, but it doesnt say where?
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{reviewid: 1476417, reviewer: 'thegoldensnitch'}
23rd June 2007:
GR8 STORY!
x Golden x
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{reviewid: 1467244, reviewer: 'addicted12'}
17th June 2007:
Hey, I love your story! SOOO much! I liked all the romance and action! Keep up the good writing! (Hey, check out my story too! It has romance and action too!)
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{reviewid: 1430663, reviewer: 'mocha_witch08'}
24th May 2007:
Wow! I loved this fic! It was everything, suspense, romance, and mystery. Nice work!
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{reviewid: 1429663, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
23rd May 2007:
Aw... I loved the ending.
I'm so glad that everything worked out for them. It's such a shame that they didn't find proof about those students being Death Eaters because it could have saved many lives.
10/10
~ Leah
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{reviewid: 1429636, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
23rd May 2007:
It's a good thing that Voldy isn't really there. I wonder what might happen now.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1429618, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
23rd May 2007:
Will Sydney get to Sirius in time? Will Lily be kidnapped? What is her reaction?
Oh the cliffhanger is fine seeing as I can just go on to the next chapter. ^_^
10/10
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{reviewid: 1429000, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
23rd May 2007:
I doubt that they'll be able to capture them or have them switch sides. I wonder why Voldy didn't ask for Alice, Lily, and Remus. Maybe Sydney.
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{reviewid: 1428995, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
23rd May 2007:
Sydney found out! Will she tell Lily? Lily needs a tutor? *faints*
10/10
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{reviewid: 1428989, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
23rd May 2007:
How could James been so stupid? He should have just told Lily, but I'm guess that he's telling her at 11?
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{reviewid: 1428689, reviewer: 'Belle_Rose'}
22nd May 2007:
What will she think when she find out that he's James?
I like this Lily. It's a perfect balance.
10/10
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