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Review #1, by Jenn

29th July 2003:

Whew! False advertising, if I\'ve ever come across any! You were better off describing the story as \"gradeschool drivel that no one should waste their time reading\".

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Review #2, by liyanne

we'll never part part 2

8th December 2002:

what? this is too short.. you call this chapter... man! but it's ok.. it's your fic not mine..

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Review #3, by Everett Scott

we'll never part part 2

20th November 2002:

I really like your concept. Here is a suggestion on how you can improve your writing skills: read other people's work, look at how they use punctuation, paragraphs, etc. Also quotations and "he said"s are being called for. If grammar isn't your strong point, another good way of becoming proficient with writing is to copy. Take a page from your favorite book, and re-type on your pc. Once you've done one page, do another, and after some time punctuation and sentence structure will come naturally. Just don't tell publishers I suggested it to you. Good luck, I hope you update soon.

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Review #4, by Kayla

we'll never part part 2

16th November 2002:

What??????!

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Review #5, by

we'll never part part 2

16th November 2002:

Not too bad, but where's this going? Please reveal some sort of plot soon! Too rushed, take your time! EDIT and embellish with dialog and details. Very flat so far. Obviously you have a story in your head and I want to read it, not just a breif summary of it! My name is longer than this! Please update! More, longer chapters!!

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