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Review #1, by psychokitten Your New Life

23rd June 2005:
Hey you really might wanna consider splitting these up and making them longer. It hurts the readers eyes if you dont space it out evenly. Thought it might be a helpful hin!

Author's Response: thansk for the advice. i just got on the site, and i'm trying to figure out how to space it correctly. I'll try to fix it soon so you can read it properly. Thanks again, and please keep reading Toria

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Review #2, by Lieke Your New Life

23rd June 2005:
Ehm, okay I didn't even bother to read this chapter because my eyes won't take it. I suggest you make little paragraphs then it's a lot easier to read! Just a suggestion!

Author's Response: thanks for the advice. i was having some problems spacing this but i think i got it to work. I'll try to fix it soon so you can read it properly. please keep reading. Thansk again Toria

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Review #3, by Lieke Prologue

23rd June 2005:
Wow, a very exciting prologue. I thinks it's a good first chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! i was nervous on what people think, and i'm glad you liked it. please keep reading!!! toria

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