Aww a poor Lily and a uber rich James how can't I like this fic???wel I can't I hope you update really soon cuz I wanna read more=D but you must do one wittle thingy for me....wel you actually must let James do it and it involves a other character namely...Lily's Dad James must kick his sorry ass....And then he must die (not becuz of James) Kill.Kill.Kill.....Okay I don't know what came over me just now but I still think James must kick his sorry ass or at least hit him and hit him where it hurts *laugs maniacally*....*cough* okay I'm back wel plese update and make a kick ass dance routine in the next chappieAuthor's Response: lol, i get it, Lily's Dad has to get whats coming to him... We'll see Report Review
well,i'm the person who asked you to write about lily being an elemental and part of a band...well i want her to be the lead guitarist and she should probably swear a lot. write from her point of view starting from the summer after her sixth year. Author's Response: i dont understand how she could be an element Report Review
lets say that lily is
-lives in ghetto,abusive dad,dead mum
-shes part of a punk-rock band
-she has tattoos on her neck,
forearms and lower back
-she is a wild girl,parties a lot at her neighborhood
-drinks,smokes,does grafiti work on walls and skateboards
-she can do wandless magic(so that her tattoos and piercings will disappear)
-she has black streaks in her hair
-dances very well(all types of dances)
-works in a bar as a bartender and dancer during the summers
-and is an elemental(fire and darkness
i know it sucks. but if you do agree then lets say that she actually acts as a goody-two-shoes in school but is actually a bad-ass. her friends and the marauders don't know the real her and they would have a masquerade during christmas. some of her schoolmates are her band members and they played in front of everyone during the ball(with their masks on). please please please write a story about this!
you can add your own ideas and not use some of mine..if you do please write a summer from lily's point of view...PLEASEAuthor's Response: you have a lot of idea, you should try and write one, im sure it'd be great! Report Review
This is a lot better than it looks and it looked pretty good to begin with. Keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks I will. Im not so good at writing summeries... Report Review
It's a great story and I hope you update soon but I suggest you get a beta.Author's Response: thanks, but whats a beta? Report Review
ok that makes a whole bunch of more sense! lol even though what i said didn't make sense....anyways please update soon!Author's Response: I will, Im kinda writing about 4 stories at the same time, but tonight Im adding another chapter for this one, I just added a new story though, should be approved soon, check it out! Report Review
Winky: You do know it is Lily Evans not Kaitlyn Evans?
Dobby: Its a bit weird...
WInky: Did you do that on purpose?
DObby: Anyway, that was a great peice of writing.
Winky: I like the way you write!
Dobby: I love it!
Winky: But what is with Kaitlyn?
DObby: Oh, Shuddup Winky! WE is trying to be nice!
Winky: Oh, I'm sorry. I was just a bit muddled, is all.
Dobby: Any way, that was great!Author's Response: haha yeah, shes supposed to have to change her name later, but I think Im just gonna do it now because it confuses people, lol, I <3 the split personalitiy thing Report Review
snaps... kaitlyn... slytherian. are you sure this is a james/lily fic?Author's Response: Dont wrry, it is Report Review
this is good, i will keep reading this story if you keep writing. plz continueAuthor's Response: kk, thanx! Report Review
what happened to Lily?Author's Response: I changed it cause it was confusing people, check it now Report Review
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