7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by fanof24 Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

13th August 2006:
That was cool. A little bit rushed though. I think you could add a bit more detail, but other than that it was an amazing piece of work! I love it. Funny. Pretty well written. Characters kept in check. Great job can't wait till the next chapter. 8/10

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Review #2, by Narcissa48 Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

10th October 2005:
ANSWER ME!!!!! will you write more?

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Review #3, by Cho rules Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

22nd September 2005:
This is REALLY good!!! please continue it!

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Review #4, by Carmen Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

18th August 2005:
I loved it. The apple was inspired.

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Review #5, by voldymouldy Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

1st July 2005:
Wowey kooleo story keep writing!

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Review #6, by Quintescence_ala_Diesis Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

23rd June 2005:
good but alittle rushed but then again you have to get every thing in so ignore the last comment and keep up the good work!

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Review #7, by Bubblechimes Sirius Black and Remus Lupin

20th June 2005:
I like this so far; you are doing a good job!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on chapter two right now!!

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