That was cool. A little bit rushed though. I think you could add a bit more detail, but other than that it was an amazing piece of work! I love it. Funny. Pretty well written. Characters kept in check. Great job can't wait till the next chapter. 8/10 Report Review
ANSWER ME!!!!! will you write more? Report Review
This is REALLY good!!! please continue it! Report Review
I loved it. The apple was inspired. Report Review
Wowey kooleo story keep writing! Report Review
good but alittle rushed but then again you have to get every thing in so ignore the last comment and keep up the good work! Report Review
I like this so far; you are doing a good job!!Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on chapter two right now!! Report Review
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