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Its SALAZAR Slytherin. AND they didn't have CDs Ipods Meg Cabot or laptops in the 70s.Author's Response: That's because my version is set in modern-day. And I'm sorry, but my Word program doesn't like ANY of the names, and I'm doing the best I can. Report Review
I really like the story so far, just one mistake, Leigh said that none of the things could happen because they are only 18 but in the previous chapters you said that Sirius was 17 and Leigh was 16.. other than that its really good! Report Review
i need more, this is great stuff Report Review
asom all 22 of them please post again soon Report Review
awwwww thats soooooo cute......... I really like this story, thenk you for updateing it. This is one of the stories that I check everyday just to see if it is updated...one of the stories that I feel as if I where sucked into it and I am watching it form the afar... so corny I no.. but I really have taken a liking to this story, great great great... updated soon please. I dont no what I will do with my self. I will be forced to do my school work. noooooooooooo THANK YOU soooo much for the update.... .....xLOVx....... Author's Response: I'm trying really hard to get these written and up . . . thanks so much for all the praise, and I'll do my best with the next one! Report Review
Hey i was just wondering how do i put up a banner? plz respond by commenting on my storie called How do I live up to him? thanks bye Report Review
Great story.... Update soon I am in love. this is a great story.... wow, she just went off.... how lovely, I love it. Update soon please. .....xLOVx..... Report Review
great chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks!
amazing chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks so much!
Im dying here I need to know where this is going. Please update soon!Author's Response: I will, I promise. School is just crazy right now. Soon, soon. Report Review
Love the story!! Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Hey again, I love the Wizard of Oz, lol, newas I liked this chappie, it was more happy and the fight about the squids names was funny in my oppinion, neways I should go to bed it's 1:36 and I have company comming tomorow, well technically today. Neways till the next chapter review, as always from a fan ~*~Laura~*~ P.S. cant wait till the net oneAuthor's Response: Thanks so much, The Wizard of Oz is one of my favorite movies. Thank you, I thought the squid's name was a stroke of inspiration myself. Report Review
cool story so far, can't wait for the next installment, from a fan
*~*Laura~*~Author's Response: Thanks so much. The next one should be out some time this week! Report Review
I love this story. Its so amazing. Sirius is so cute. Update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks so much!
Omg so cute! I love that last bit, the whole no its not good enough aww, i love it so far. I always like Sirius fanfics...they're always so cute.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Sirius fics as well (obviously!) thanks for reading! Report Review
It's a good start... it all just happened soo suddenly, it's like, 'where'd that come from?!' Like, I suppose it might work if the story had started in sixth year or something, and these feelings had been building up, but in the first chapter there are already 'I love you's, I guess it's just not gradual enough for the reader. Really good start though!Author's Response: Thanks. You'll see later that the feelings have been building up for a long time and yeah. thanks for reading. It was supposed to be sudden. Report Review
I love Skip-Bo its such a good game. I like the Notebook add in in my opinion thats one of the greatest lines in the movie.Author's Response: I don't get it why people don't get Skip-Bo. It's like . . . It's counting. NOT THAT HARD. It's one of my absolute favorite games. I totally agree that those are like the best lines in the movie. Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
I really like this story so far... ^^ Update soon <3Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Oh gawd, i totally swoon over MWPP fics.*swoons* I luv them! Good fic. Nice and long. Just the way i like them! ;o)Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
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