I like how your story so far. Although, I would like work on the dialog. If you want people to believe that your sceneryo could work you need to make it a bit more believeable. Nobody says, "I sure do" and I don't know about you, but I wouldn't blurt out my life story to some guys i had just met. Report Review
Harry's definitely smitten... Hope he gets the girl :) Go get 'em Harry! Report Review
I meant here it is... Author's Response: that is so nice of you, I greatly appreciate all you did for me. ThanksAuthor's Response: now hod do I put it in my summary? Sorry I am sort of new at this and I tried countless ways too.Author's Response: do you have the html? Report Review
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