{reviewid: 768070, reviewer: 'Professional%20Reviewer'}
12th November 2005:
ur story wuz excellent A++ u should get paid 4 this
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{reviewid: 759341, reviewer: 'rukia'}
5th November 2005:
the heck was that!?
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{reviewid: 444456, reviewer: 'angelpur'}
3rd April 2005:
no offence, but it's way to short, and you need to check your puntuation...
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{reviewid: 375463, reviewer: 'Margaux'}
14th February 2005:
Yay to you!!! This site needs more funny stories! GO YOU!
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{reviewid: 117919, reviewer: 'Slick'}
16th March 2004:
Ummm the content is good, u seriously need to get some capitilization and punctuation tho. Otheriwse its ok.
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{reviewid: 55041, reviewer: 'donkeycabbages'}
24th July 2003:
ok, first use some puncuations and periods. seriously. good plot and stuff but run on sentences make it confusing! I had to read like every chapter over about 6 times before i got what it meant and stuff.
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{reviewid: 50909, reviewer: 'Someone'}
13th July 2003:
errrrrrrrrrrrrr, this is SUPPOSED to be stupid, right?
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{reviewid: 44012, reviewer: 'CythereaRx5Phoenix'}
30th May 2003:
Hey ppl i am back from the mental hospital!!
That was just really bad ya know...No grammar and I hate fics that are like that...too bad but your not a good author!! ha ha ha ...I still read it tho and reveiwed to be nice!!
soooooo bye
now
bye again
I shall return!!~!~!
Leaves
Comes back
Oh did I say bye?
I shall return ...... erm....UM....... Oh yeah.......again!!!
Bye
- Cytherea Rx5 Phoenix
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{reviewid: 33903, reviewer: 'Kayla'}
25th November 2002:
Cool story! hope you'll write more
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{reviewid: 33835, reviewer: 'Kayla'}
20th November 2002:
What is that?
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{reviewid: 33832, reviewer: 'Aydrian'}
20th November 2002:
It is a good start. I suggest punctuation for the mood though.
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{reviewid: 33757, reviewer: 'cybershelb'}
16th November 2002:
really good only your lack of punctuation gets annoying. can't wait to hear more!!
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