12 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Professional Reviewer harry and wait wait wheres harry?

12th November 2005:
ur story wuz excellent A++ u should get paid 4 this

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Review #2, by rukia harry and wait wait wheres harry?

5th November 2005:
the heck was that!?

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Review #3, by angelpur harry and wait wait wheres harry?

3rd April 2005:
no offence, but it's way to short, and you need to check your puntuation...

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Review #4, by Margaux harry and wait wait wheres harry?

14th February 2005:
Yay to you!!! This site needs more funny stories! GO YOU!

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Review #5, by Slick harry and wait wait wheres harry?

16th March 2004:
Ummm the content is good, u seriously need to get some capitilization and punctuation tho. Otheriwse its ok.

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Review #6, by donkeycabbages harry and wait wait wheres harry?

24th July 2003:
ok, first use some puncuations and periods. seriously. good plot and stuff but run on sentences make it confusing! I had to read like every chapter over about 6 times before i got what it meant and stuff.

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Review #7, by Someone harry and wait wait wheres harry?

13th July 2003:
errrrrrrrrrrrrr, this is SUPPOSED to be stupid, right?

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Review #8, by CythereaRx5Phoenix harry and wait wait wheres harry?

30th May 2003:
Hey ppl i am back from the mental hospital!! That was just really bad ya know...No grammar and I hate fics that are like that...too bad but your not a good author!! ha ha ha ...I still read it tho and reveiwed to be nice!! soooooo bye now bye again I shall return!!~!~! Leaves Comes back Oh did I say bye? I shall return ...... erm....UM....... Oh yeah.......again!!! Bye - Cytherea Rx5 Phoenix

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Review #9, by Kayla harry and wait wait wheres harry?

25th November 2002:
Cool story! hope you'll write more

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Review #10, by Kayla harry and wait wait wheres harry?

20th November 2002:
What is that?

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Review #11, by Aydrian harry and wait wait wheres harry?

20th November 2002:
It is a good start. I suggest punctuation for the mood though.

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Review #12, by cybershelb harry and wait wait wheres harry?

16th November 2002:
really good only your lack of punctuation gets annoying. can't wait to hear more!!

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