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Review #1, by mary ann The Truth

23rd September 2005:
this story is really good! i hope you post the next chapter soon!

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Review #2, by Twix14 The Truth

15th June 2005:
great start! there's only one thing....Harry seems a bit OOC'ish wen he just says, "boy do i have a lot to tell you guys" at the very end. Harry's usually a bit of an invert so i dont think he'd be that willing to talk. of course, that's only my opinion! lol! keep riting, its a great start!

Author's Response: Thanks. I took your advice and adjusted the end of the chapter enjoy.

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