I'm so confused. Why does he keep saying "5 days to go"? And what would they have to be cured of? And why is James mad at Sirius? Why are all of them mad at Sirius?

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oh this is really good!! I love it...

just a question...
Isn't the reason that the Marauders got thier nicknames becuase of the form they took as an animagus?
But in this story you have them using thier nicknames but they haven't changed yet.

I love Remus and Sirius as a couple hahaha...the only thing I don't like is when they call eachother love...just a personal opinion though

8/10

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I thought the ending was interesting. I'm glad Remus and Sirius are able to be together. Peter's a nightmare, eh? Well done.

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I liked it - I liked what you did with Peter.

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I think this is a really fun story. One suggestion: generally, when typing, it's a good idea to put a single space after commas and two spaces after periods. It gives your work a professional look, and makes it seem less rushed. Hope that helps!

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I love that they finally had a Public Display of Affection. I can see Sirius having no problem with that, and Remus being somewhat mortified!

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Oh - so cute - it's killing him not to be with Remus - that breaks my heart!

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It makes me smile to think that Sirius gets ambushed and dragged into broom closets. Honestly...what's a fella to do?

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No worries - I'm quite fond of puns - especially really bad ones!!! Off to read the next.

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Yes, very short. Like the ownership charm. 5 days??

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nooooooooo it can't be over noooooooo. anyways great story i give u a ten. oh wait they don't let us rate hear oh well u still get a ten

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ummm, my first review. One thumb up! Three fingers up, read between the lines! Thats for making Sirius seem like a dodohead! -Aru Chan

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No offense, but I didn't find it very interesting.

Author's Response: Eh, I'm gonna rewrite it sooner or later.I now hate this story, so now I'm gonna rewrite it.

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what the hell? im so confused. why is remus being a <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored? why is james so crabby? why is peter *shudder* like, hitting on sirius? and WHAT MADE SIRIUS SO UNPOPULAR?? i LOVE him.

Author's Response: I luff him too.My fav character, I just thought it'd be a good change for him and it would deflate his ego a bit.

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lol.......his hand aching.......when i read that i immediately thought of.......what else he would've been doing down there........hehe. well. im confused about the "5 days to go" thing. very.

Author's Response: 5 Days to go meant that Remus and Peter wouldn't change back for 5 days.Remus found a way to change and fix that.

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T'was so freaking cute! Some of the parts were a bit confusing to me, but I eventually figured it all out. o_O Lol! Great job on this one! You have really gotten me hooked on Remus and Sirius fics! They are perfect together! :)

Author's Response: I think I'm going to back through and add more details.

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I loved it! "Ahhhhhhhh!!!!His hair touched me !" I died laughing! Then, of course, I came back to life to continue the story! ;)

Author's Response: That actually happenend to me.Someone with really greasy hair touched my arm one day.

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So ulike GC huh?

Author's Response: Yep, I like GC, why?

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^_^ cool story!!!!!!!! loved the ending! Sirius and Remus are so cute! 9and hot!)

Author's Response: Awwwwwwwww, thank you.I think they are adorable too

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The story has a real good plot i think but everything seems so empty. It would help if you could go into detail with what all these things are like what the effect of the potion was and the other stuff. Besides that it's good and it makes the story lengthier if you space it out!

Author's Response: Thanks for the help.Since I don't have a beta reader, it helps alot.

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