{reviewid: 2630485, reviewer: 'jesse%20abedeen'}
18th December 2011:
doing great so far be as quick as you can and put the next chapter on i want to see if harry has learnt his lesson yet.
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{reviewid: 2629139, reviewer: 'Jakumo1'}
15th December 2011:
AH! Where's the rest of the story?! 0.o
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{reviewid: 2628858, reviewer: 'Darkwing'}
14th December 2011:
It has potential, but it is very poorly written. You might want to consider revision.
Author's Response: This chapter was written years ago. Would you mind reading the rest to let me know if there has been improvement?
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{reviewid: 2628564, reviewer: 'Up_2_No_Good'}
13th December 2011:
Interesting... Wandless magic maybe? Unless I read that wrong. She's very angry, our Hermione is. I feel no pity whatsoever for Harry, he totally deserved it. I love where this story is going and am curious where Hermione's future is leading. Great, amazing chapter! I'll be watching for another update! :)
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{reviewid: 2621772, reviewer: 'Vira'}
27th November 2011:
This is going so great! Please, please, please update soon! I'm sitting on pins and needles here! ^-^
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{reviewid: 2598173, reviewer: 'Azaelas'}
3rd October 2011:
really cliched, but when my 1st bf asked me out it was really cliched 2...
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{reviewid: 2592064, reviewer: 'Dragoness101'}
19th September 2011:
this was way to cheesy.
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{reviewid: 2591835, reviewer: 'shuzza'}
19th September 2011:
good start, cant wait to read on!
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{reviewid: 2583096, reviewer: 'Helena-Jasmine'}
3rd September 2011:
That is so sad, why did you kill her parents, as if she hasn't been through enough
Author's Response: It'll all be explained as the story progresses. It was unplanned while writing, and was a tough decision to make when deciding on whether or not to do so. However, it fits best with the future plot. Thx for reviewing. :)
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{reviewid: 2583094, reviewer: 'Helena-Jasmine'}
3rd September 2011:
That is so sad, why did you kill her parents, as if she hasn't been through enough
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{reviewid: 2582441, reviewer: 'VanessaVoiletRiddleMalfoy'}
2nd September 2011:
aw. this is sad...but great chapter anyway.
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{reviewid: 2579646, reviewer: 'KiraPotter16'}
28th August 2011:
AW! this whole story is great! i mean, there's punctuation errors and in this chapter you mispelled 'stalkers' and it kinda ruined the romantic atmosphere when Draco was thinking that Hermione looked like an 'angle'. i think you meant angel? Still, loving this! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry about the mistakes. I'll fix them right away.
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{reviewid: 2577961, reviewer: 'Helena-Jasmine%20Stevenson'}
| Review #13, by Helena-Jasmine Stevenson | Chapter 9 |
25th August 2011:
It wasn't Cheesy, it was down right beautiful
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{reviewid: 2576412, reviewer: 'Maddyxxx'}
23rd August 2011:
WOW that is great i hope you write another chapter it was soo exciting not cheesy at all!
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{reviewid: 2576409, reviewer: 'VanessaVoiletRiddleMalfoy'}
23rd August 2011:
not chessy at all. it just right ammout of chessy. love it, and the mistery. sorry if i spelled anything wrong.. i not a well speller
1o/1o.
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{reviewid: 2570676, reviewer: 'Tatiana'}
14th August 2011:
Awesome! Great pace, a really great flow is building up
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{reviewid: 2570673, reviewer: 'Tatiana'}
14th August 2011:
Like the plot - not a bad pace either :-)
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{reviewid: 2569398, reviewer: 'Jessie'}
13th August 2011:
I think she is off to Professor Snape's office
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{reviewid: 2561995, reviewer: 'WonderfulxxNightmare'}
5th August 2011:
More more more! :D It's very good though and I can't wait to see what happens between them! Though I am abit confused on the Mione insult back in Chapter 2 I believe it was..
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{reviewid: 2561990, reviewer: 'KTMalfoy'}
5th August 2011:
Draco is so great :) poor hermione tho. Ron and Harry are poops. Good on ya Draco for making an effort. :) I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 2561910, reviewer: 'Vixen'}
5th August 2011:
I love it!
Please update soon!
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{reviewid: 2561755, reviewer: 'MartyPotterRiddleFan'}
5th August 2011:
ohmypotter!! ilovethiiss!! please write more!!
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{reviewid: 2561704, reviewer: 'Nika'}
5th August 2011:
I like it, I do, I do, I do! Write more, please :D
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{reviewid: 2557590, reviewer: 'SexyDracoFan'}
31st July 2011:
Really interesting!!! I can't wait to read the next part!! This is different from the rest And awesome please update soon!! :D
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{reviewid: 2556799, reviewer: 'kenzieweasley'}
29th July 2011:
its really good next chap soon?
Author's Response: Already going through Validation, should be up by next week sometime. :D
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