Aw, that was THE cutest story I have ever read! You should write more stories like that, it was so awsome. I would like it if you worte another story where Ron comforted Haley or maybe he could comfort Hermione? Just an idea. Please write more cute stories like that. Happy Writing!

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Aw! That was so sweet! You should write more stories like this you are very talented. Keep writing!

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I really really like this story! I like how you incorporated all the main characters, and I really like how you made Ron and Hermione get married (everyone knows they would!). Great story! You're a really good writer! (Just a little constructive criticism: try to check yur punctuation, add more commas, and use more capitals). Keep up the good work, and good luck for future stories!

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Wow that was really good. It was really sweet before, but that last paragraph. Wow. "When it comes to keeping my family safe. I’m afraid of nothing.” Gold. Pure gold. I may not be a parent but anyone with children or babysits on a regular basic should read this story. Cause they would absolutly love it. Hey do you think that you could come and read my stories? Again, love it. ~Tabby, the Kat

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awwwwwww > i loved it!! > u should rlly continue the story

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cute!

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Whoa, I wasn't expecting that ending.

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Awwww........that is sooo touching! I like the quote at the end about him being afrarid of spiders and harry not being afarid. Who was hte bald man?

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