This is GREAT. It's been SO LONG. Please, consider coming back and updating!?

Author's Response: Slowly, slowly but hopefully this story will get finished. Thank you!

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MAGNIFICENT pls come back to writing. I'm just mad I found this story now :((

Thank you soo much!!

Author's Response: I'm slowly working on coming back, so thank you!

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Way too many flashbacks! Although you are a good writer, I don't think you know what you are trying to write well enough to develop it completely. I really tried to read this story, but it needs a ton of editing.

Author's Response: Oh something critical! How rare! Mm it appears we'll have to disagree. I like flashbacks, that's why I use them. If you mind them at this stage, you'll absolutely loathe the last 6 or so chapters. And the story isn't immaculate but it's neat and dynamic with a consistent internal logic. That's more than many others could boast at the age I wrote this. Read to the end and get back to me.

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No! Two years is two too long! Please update soon, we're all still in suspense!

Author's Response: Has it been as long as that? Oh god. I will try! Thanks for sticking with me.

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YES why so good? It can't be said enough, myenigmaticeyes. Update update update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will try!

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AH!
Please, you have to update! Please, please, please? With a cherry on top?
As you can see, i'm not ontenterhooks

Author's Response: I know, I know. I will try! Definitely. Thanks :)

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ps you couldn't have left it on a bigger cliffhanger! pleaase, I have to know what happens next! both the story and your authorship are beyond belief!

Author's Response: :) you're very kind.

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magnificent. really really evocative. update update!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know I'm due to update, bear with me.

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you can't leave us on the edge of our seats for much longer, you're not cruel like that surely!!! haha beautiful story, really the best on this site at the very least. please update, no pressure. i just can't wait to see this wonderful, brilliant story to the very bittersweet end!!

Author's Response: That's very sweet, thank you! I'll try.

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this was a work of art! maybe the most understated story on this entire site, the work of a true author and true genius! what happens next? update update!

Author's Response: thank you very, very much. hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter and the rest of the story, too. I'm aiming to update soon.

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great story please try and UPDATE SOON! love this story

Author's Response: thanks very much, I'm back to hopefully finish the next chapter soon.

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WHERE ARE THE UPDATES?! PLEASE this is too good and I need to know what happens!! DONT FORGET ABOUT US. 10/10 for sure!!

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter. I wrote myself into a bit of a hole but I'm hoping for an update soon!

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freakin' loved it all. LOVED IT.

Author's Response: thank you to my lovely sister who did this and made me look like a tool. thanks so much.

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It's been a long time since you updated and I am anxiously waiting! I know you might be busy but please please please update soon! I love this story!

Author's Response: I know I know time's gotten away from me! Thanks for bearing with me! I will do my utter best not to let this wait drag on for ages. I just need the update to be marvellous...err and I also need to write it. Thanks for the review, people seem to be commenting less so it's appreciated!

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This is a really good story and I love it I just get confused with Jade/Arabella thay are the same person right??

Author's Response: In the years this story has been up and followed by people, just in the last few months have people been asking this question more than once. Definitely the same person, her full name is Arabella Jade Thoreau Riddle. That's introduced in the first chapter. I use Jade instead of Arabella from time to time only in the first few chapters (which are transitional if you read the author's notes) and then at times when Luc is thinking or talking to her. The name Jade represents her Riddle side and her past while Arabella represents the Thoreau instincts she naturally has and how she's evolving. This is all clear when you think and really delve into the plot of the story. Sorry this response is so long. Hope you continued to read up until the denser chapters!! Thanks for enjoying it so far!

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Fifty-thousand thumbs up. Please add another chapter, dying for this to continue.

Author's Response: Haha I'll keep working on an update, thanks very much.

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two things:
a) love the chapter summaries
b) brilliant story
c) brilliant writing
d) brilliant everything

Author's Response: I like how that's twice as many as two things. Well done. Thanks for reviewing.

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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE GIVE US ANOTHER CHAPTER YOUR GREAT

Author's Response: Thank you thank you I'll try!

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I've been looking for this story for age, knew I'd find it! worth the wait and everything these last chapters were flippin amazing. you have an enormous amount of ridiculous talent and you have to publish something sometime. I'd buy it, gosh would I ever. I'll be waiting for the next update breathlesslyy this story never ceased to amaze me!!

Author's Response: Welcome back, then! Thank you very much, you're so kind. I'll try to update soon, hopefully the story will continue to wow you.

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your chapters get soo long but soo good thanks for a good read update soon to see how it all works out
ps i'll be checking out some of the works you have as references they sound pretty good too wicked idea keeping us engaged youre clearly well read

Author's Response: I know, they do get a bit long. Definitely check out some of those references, Milan Kundera especially. Ps, like the 'electric feel'.

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wowowow really good lol

Author's Response: Thank you thank you.

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There was a teaser?! Hints as to what's about to happen?! Share, please?!

Author's Response: Only a very short one with a scene I pushed to the next chapter. You'll see it soon enough, but things are going to come together shortly. That's all I can say. That and, just between you and I, keep an eye on this Sorceress.

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Update again? Too soon to ask? Please?

Author's Response: Haha I'll try, I really will.

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This is beautiful. Every last word of it is beautiful. Please do not ever go so long without updating again. Thank you for this glorious story. I mean it.

Author's Response: You're very sweet, thank you very much.

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Wicked cool. Nuff said.

Author's Response: Haha likewise.

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