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ooooh you'll be SUED for GOOD, copier... and you didnt even tell the readers that this isnt originally your idea... *shame on you*

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hmmm... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... what is harry getting at, eh? he..he..he...this is an awesome story, I wonder what her whole dream was about anyways....I can't wait til she goes to school!...(inside scream)....

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This story kicks all american ass, Rozita!!!! I really like the detail in it and the banner is kick ass too!!!!

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wow!! I like that :P

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You have an interesting start to your story. The idea is very good. I don't want to sound mean or anything but your mechanics are a bit off. I would read through your chapters before you post so that you can correct things. I'd be happy to help if you need a beta or are wondering about HTML. I'll be looking for your next chapter, keep up the good work!

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luv it

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hmm very mysterious beginning. i like it!

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its pretty good so far...kinda confusing but i'll get used to it!! update soon!

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