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Review #1, by alecia The slip up

8th July 2005:
see i told you it was bad! im gonna delete it.....she just gave up because she hated her own writing... *sigh* i know it is horrid, thats why i never finished it! ~alecia

Author's Response: Yeah... so, we'll delete it then. So your friend has given up on writing altogether? That's sad. Oh, well, let's start fresh! ~ Sam

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Review #2, by voldemorts_gurl09 The slip up

8th July 2005:
Note to self: Sam here. This is not good. Not good at all. The grammar needs some fixing. *sigh* I vote for deleting it, start fresh. Alecia? ~ Sam

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Review #3, by Demius Lupin ‘confessions we thought we wouldn’t hear from Hermi’

9th June 2005:
It was even BETTER than the first chappie! You have to update on this one. Can you involve a little more action with Avia and Oliver plz!!

Author's Response: yup and thanks! i'll probably have them have a hogsmade trip of somethin'..i don't know, im throwing around that idea....

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Review #4, by Demius Lupin The slip up

9th June 2005:
I loved that story! you're really good at this!! Just one iddy biddy q? Whose 3rd person!

Author's Response: I really don't know who the 3rd person is...I just kind of typed it, and cause I was in a hurry cause my sis needed the computer...well thanks sooo much for the review! if you have any ideas for me to put in the story feel free to email me!

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Review #5, by voldemorts_gurl09 The slip up

8th June 2005:
com on guys! I haven't got a single review yet! PLZ REVIEW!!!!!!! luv ya all! luv voldemorts_gurl09

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