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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Haley Vampires

30th June 2005:
Or you could ignore me...that's cool too...

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Review #2, by Haley Vampires

29th June 2005:
I'll beta for you if you want me to...

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Review #3, by Haley Vampires

29th June 2005:
A little better with detail, but the story is confusing. all of a sudden george is a slayer?

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Review #4, by Haley Vampires

29th June 2005:
Whats with the front slashes? I think you should add some detail in, and sort of let them have emotions. Who are spike and Emerald? How did they get to Hogwarts? Why are they connected with Draco? Why is fred at hogwarts? Your spelling is a little...bad. I Strongly suggest you find a beta. This stroy would prolly be pretty good if you work on it. I am off to go through your next chapter. Sorry if I hurt you feelings.

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Review #5, by dracoandme Vampires

27th May 2005:
alot of grammar mistakes but oter than that is was pretty good

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Review #6, by lor Vampires

14th July 2004:
I LOVE it so far!!! Damn spike is lucky!
ne wayz i LOVE the sotry keep up the good work!!! ^_^

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Review #7, by crestfallen Vampires

28th April 2003:
Oh this is awsome! I love how in the firts chapter Spike and Draco always kiss (that lucky girl!) write more, vampires are the best *runs away chasing Draco*

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Review #8, by Kayla Vampires

27th April 2003:
The story is quite good. Plese countinue soon.

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