Or you could ignore me...that's cool too... Report Review
I'll beta for you if you want me to... Report Review
A little better with detail, but the story is confusing. all of a sudden george is a slayer? Report Review
Whats with the front slashes? I think you should add some detail in, and sort of let them have emotions. Who are spike and Emerald? How did they get to Hogwarts? Why are they connected with Draco? Why is fred at hogwarts? Your spelling is a little...bad. I Strongly suggest you find a beta. This stroy would prolly be pretty good if you work on it. I am off to go through your next chapter. Sorry if I hurt you feelings. Report Review
alot of grammar mistakes but oter than that is was pretty good Report Review
I LOVE it so far!!! Damn spike is lucky!ne wayz i LOVE the sotry keep up the good work!!! ^_^ Report Review
Oh this is awsome! I love how in the firts chapter Spike and Draco always kiss (that lucky girl!) write more, vampires are the best *runs away chasing Draco* Report Review
The story is quite good. Plese countinue soon. Report Review
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