{reviewid: 2760975, reviewer: 'Alysea'}
31st December 2012:
You should try and watch your grammar, interesting idea, but it would be better if it had more detail in it. But continue writing, I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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{reviewid: 2273324, reviewer: 'Jessie%20C.'}
24th December 2009:
Huh. that was kind of confusing. i wish it was longer when they were in the pit, you know telling each other their secrets and gradually becoming friends.but nice story idea!
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{reviewid: 871465, reviewer: 'BritishPrincess'}
23rd January 2006:
It's ok but a little confusing. Check your grammar. Otherwhys good
Author's Response: sorry about that... this was my first story...
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{reviewid: 744977, reviewer: 'Animagus1412'}
23rd October 2005:
lol, at last I found this story.. I like it..!!! even though it's only on shot, I'm puttin it on my fave..!
Author's Response: awwww yay!
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{reviewid: 700197, reviewer: 'Hunny_Baby_Doll'}
18th September 2005:
ahahahaha! i added it to my favorites!
Author's Response: awww thanx so much!! <3
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{reviewid: 690008, reviewer: 'Pixiegirl'}
10th September 2005:
That was a wonderful chapter!!!!! I wish I had seen Draco's abs!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Iknow... :gonk: bet they were sexy!
well thanx for r/r
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{reviewid: 660894, reviewer: 'abby'}
22nd August 2005:
yay! that was nice! i was so anxious! anywho- that's it right? cuz that was awesome enough to be done! heheh good job!
Author's Response: ya thats it and thanx for being loyal enough to stick around I am glad you liked it... :0)
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{reviewid: 659332, reviewer: 'red_envy'}
21st August 2005:
oooookk... this was the by far the weirdest fan fic I have ever read...
Author's Response: okay thank you for your reveiw
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{reviewid: 658932, reviewer: 'Catalina'}
21st August 2005:
[b] The secound Chapter has now been added onto the first yay!??! I hope you enjoy it!! [/b]
Author's Response: IGNORE THIS
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{reviewid: 638916, reviewer: 'gt'}
10th August 2005:
that was good but i think what really saved your story was those last 2 lines you said you wanted to leave it like a cliffhanger well you got what you wanted! good story!
Author's Response: The secound Chapter has now been added onto the first yay!??!
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{reviewid: 637536, reviewer: 'abby'}
9th August 2005:
HURRY UP WITH THAT CHAPTER IM DYIN HERE!!!!!! OR I CAN SAY IM HUNGRY FOR THE REST OF THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The secound Chapter has now been added onto the first yay!??!
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{reviewid: 637394, reviewer: 'abby'}
9th August 2005:
OMG! THE NEW CHAPTER IS NOT UP YET?!?!?!?!?! GET ON IT! I LUV YOUR STORY TO MUCH!!!!!!
Author's Response: The secound Chapter has now been added onto the first yay!??!
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{reviewid: 633331, reviewer: 'abby'}
6th August 2005:
oooohhhhh! i like! that new chapter btter be up soon!!!! hurryor i will surely die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The secound Chapter has now been added onto the first yay!??!
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{reviewid: 606058, reviewer: 'Eternalearth'}
23rd July 2005:
Hey girl! Wuz up? LOL
ABSOLUTLEY LOVE THE STORY! YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE!!
Author's Response: I Know It is taking me for ever but The secound Chapter has now been added onto the first yay!??!
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{reviewid: 575888, reviewer: 'ILuvSwimming'}
3rd July 2005:
well hurry up
Author's Response: huh?!?!
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{reviewid: 564124, reviewer: 'FrillingOFreak'}
26th June 2005:
Interesting. Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: I am glad you like it and the 2nd chapter has been added into the first
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{reviewid: 556121, reviewer: 'sarah'}
21st June 2005:
i think that is not finish , but is funny
Author's Response: okay I might add another chapter latter I am just kinda wanting to leave it as a cliff hanger
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{reviewid: 555218, reviewer: 'Elizabeth'}
20th June 2005:
That's so cruel. You shouldn't have it on the complete list then!
It was a pretty good chapter that my moronic sister doesn't seem to realize.
BTW - there are two people writing this review (I'm the second one. My name is Isabelle first person is my twin sister Elizabeth. We're identical but she has absoulutely no appreciation for good writing.)
Author's Response: was she the one thats said my writting sucked? and my name is is elizabeth too!! anyways thank you for your revewi -- I might leave it a cliffhanger but I might add one more chapter I dont know.. guess we'll see wont we?
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{reviewid: 554129, reviewer: 'Jazgirl87'}
20th June 2005:
your grammar and spelling suck
Author's Response: not really... but thankyou for your comment
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{reviewid: 553736, reviewer: 'bamameg1324'}
20th June 2005:
please right more!!!!!
Author's Response: thanx guys for the reveiws...
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{reviewid: 537419, reviewer: 'Serpent_Love'}
9th June 2005:
ok.....i just need to stop drooling now and then i can relize whats going on..lol...its great so far!!! update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanx alot for you sweet reveiw I will update as soon as possible! thanx for R/R
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{reviewid: 536325, reviewer: 'Brie'}
9th June 2005:
good story asap asap asap asap asap asap
Author's Response: lol sounds like you guys liked it... I will update soon keep R/R
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{reviewid: 534714, reviewer: 'Amberly'}
8th June 2005:
this story is great ! Keep righting! Write moer and fast!!!
Author's Response: you sound excited is it really that good??? lol will update soon thanx
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{reviewid: 534674, reviewer: 'Pixiegirl'}
8th June 2005:
Please, please, please update soon!
Author's Response: you sound excited... I will updatesoon I have had some delays but twill be up soon... thanx for R/R
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{reviewid: 534606, reviewer: 'the%20ferret%20is%20mine'}
8th June 2005:
perfect just make them kiss and post soon!1
Author's Response: yes I shall lol!! thanx for R/r will update soon!
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