Eyes bitch hair allrong Report Review
They both managed a wry smile, sitting and waiting for the cleyebrow to start. he was ducking behind the secret peyebrowageway
Check your editing its a fowl and it cinda odd Report Review
Yeah, great story an all, but it's really annoying me the way that some words are substituted. I know that this is for the rating, but it leaves me having to work out the real meaning... Apart from that great fanfic! Report Review
I love this story so much, it's amazing and has such great ideas
Please update soon!! Report Review
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Is Amelia Hermione?! I love this story it's so addicting!!! Please update soon! Report Review
Oh God I was laughing so hard. But I like Snape, sort of sad to see him be mean to Lily... Report Review
i enjoy reading this:) Report Review
ok lady its been one and a half year.
i believe that is more than enuff time to rite a bloody ending!
WHY make ur story so freaking fantastic if your going to leave me hanging from this stupid cliff???
I've been checking for updates EVERY WEEK!!!
I suppose ou don't know how absolutely frustrating this is!!!
This is one of my five favorite Lily/James fanfics. It deserves to be published. You have really beautifuol skills and PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE use these skills to rite up a nice happy sappy lovey dovey ending.
with a cherry on top
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woho.a full year has passd.Y R U NT UPDATING..??? plz plz plz update soon..m dyin to hear d rest of d story.. Report Review
Well done ! i like this story a lot. But please do finish quickly as you can I'm waiting to read the whole story.When are you going to publish the next chapter? Report Review
I've really enjoyed the story you've created so far. Its intersting and I always wanted to know what happened next. I really hope you get back to writing this story so it can have a proper ending. Report Review
are you gnoig to finish this story? i would love to know how you're gonna end it =] Report Review
oh my god you need to update! :) Report Review
oh my gosh this has to be my favorite chapter of harry potter fanfiction i have ever read in my LIFE of fanfiction! :) Report Review
This story was utterly amazing.
It had just the right amount of teenage drama mixed with mature issues, the perfect levels of everyday fluff, humour and conversation, but also added interesting new settings and action-packed battle scenes.
Also, you weren't afraid to combine it with the smoldering sexual tension that, to be honest, many Marauder writer's are afraid of broaching for fear of being too smutty, but you got it perfect. It made me feel like I was falling in love with James too :)
When she found out she was pregnant, I actually cried just a little.
It was everything I want in a story, and if this was a novel in a store, I would gladly buy it, and read it over and over again.
Perfect 10/10. :)Author's Response: It is as yet unfinished, I've just been ridiculously distracted for a while. I've still got to tie up some loose ends and finish it up before it's stamped as "finished," so I do hope you come back and read the ending bits.
I am very glad that you approve. I tried to make the series mature as the kids did, and towards the last chapters I know it's going to be a bit more morbid due to the fact that the time period in which the Wizarding World is in at that time will be a crappy time, indeed... Report Review
Ok, I'm a leetle confused- WHY THE BLEEDING FLIPPING BLOODY DAMNED HELL HAVE YOU NOT FINIHED THIS STORY? I FINALLY FIGURE OUT HOW TO LEAVE A REVIEW HERE, I CHECK AT LEAST TWICE A WEEK, AND FOR ALMOSTEIGHT MONTHS I FIND ONE, MAYBE TWO NEW CHAPPIES? GET YOUR BUTT BACK HERE ASAP!
oh, and btw, love the library chapter. Mwah ha ha ha!!!Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm sorry!! I'm trying to get around to finishing it but I always get distracted. I really really want to finish it before the New Year (because validation times take forever and a day on here), I PROMISE I'M GOING TO FINISH IT!!! Report Review
I would just like to tell you, this story is very good and I am really enjoying it. But on a low note, James Potter's eyes are hazel not blue. I just thought you might want to know.Author's Response: Yeah, yet another of those author errors. I noticed it eventually and changed it, but I leave things like this in here to remind myself and others of how smart I've become :P Report Review
hey.waiting desperately for more.plz update soon.Author's Response: I know, I really need to get on this, I apologize! Report Review
Bahahahahahahaha at Sirius and the lot screaming for Lily while she was giving birth. Best part of the whole chapter. Now, I read this a long time ago and forwent a review, so I don't remember all of it, but that part did stick with me. I remember laughing at it for a good deal of time, haha. Hope my lack of a real review doesn't upset you, but I just wanted to bring that part up, seeing as I don't recall all the other parts (I read this quite some time ago). I PINKY promise (:p)to give you a real, proper review for the newest chapter once I get around to reading it!Author's Response: That's quite alright, I'm very accustomed to not recieving reviews. Report Review
aww! they're innocent! lol well when it comes to that heheAuthor's Response: Aren't they? Just darling, darling, aren't they? Report Review
so dumbledore knows...
an lily an james
who btw is chaserAuthor's Response: This is an AU story. Ergo all my details won't match up with JKR's. Report Review
i love this story keep it up... i'de love to se Beky and Sirius get together though! xxAuthor's Response: Ahaha that would be traummatic. Report Review
AW! That is so sad! I'm crying, I cant believe they died like that. I expected Charles to be fighting for his daughters life, but he just fought to get to Becky's body, which was somehow even more heart crushing. Poor Amelia, it kind of reminds me of the young tom riddle situation.
You know what I think? I doubt you would write this far into the future, but Harry should somehow find out about her.
Wouldnt you think that spontanious child magic would make people think Amelia is different? Poor her, she'll be shunned, I'm sure.
Yeah, I'm putting way too much thought into this, I know.
AMazing chapter, please write more!Author's Response: If you read/remember the beginning of the "Auror In Training: 6th Year" where Amelia is talking to Harry about how her parents died, you recall that she tells him that the Death Eaters tortured Charles to the point of insanity, therefore the only thing left on his mind, the one fact that consumed his entire being in the last moments of his life, was the fact that the woman he loved most in the entire world had just been killed right in front of him. Very, very tragic situation.
Ahh, so you have not read AIT6. I would suggest you doing so. I will warn you beforehand it was written about 5 years ago so the point of view p***es off about everyone that reads it, but it is an Amelia/Harry story, as are AIT7 and the last installment, FFA (and a soon-coming sequel to FFA). Report Review
loved it (:
its getting so intense and sad though D:
xoxo ~Author's Response: i do agree, things are rather tense for them... Report Review
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