oh my GOD
I CANT STOP LAUGHING
BRILLIANT

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omg.
i read two sentences
and stopped. and i can
already tell you. this is
horrible! have even read
the books?? it's called
spell check, try it sometime.
you suck.
my rating is not 1 it's 0
they didn't have that option.

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No offence... But I read the 1st few sentences... And couldn't continue reading because you spely MALFOY wrong! M-A-L-F-O-Y !!! And You even spelt the title wrong :S I'm really sorry to say this but I just couldn't be bothered to read it! I really don't mean to be rude but perhaps the fact that everyone who has reviewed your fic says it sucks ... Maybe you should delete it ?? God I'm writing a novel of my own with this reveiw... Sorry but it wasn't good.

Signed * Danielle x [Who is outraged that you couldn't spell MALFOY!]

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YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ok I read the first bit. you misspelled malfoy every time. there is no R. I'll say it again. you're thick. this story should be deleted and you should be banned from writing "stories". if youy can even call that a story.

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*throws heavy objects at your head* what is wrong with you!!!??? god, you're thick. learn to SPELL. You misspelled the title for god's sake! DETH!? It's DEATH. The summary. Come on. "Harr dies." who in the heck is 'Harr'??? Come on. Jesus. *throws the larhest dictionary in the world at you* now when you re-gain conciousness, use that to spell.

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What was that??

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Oh my God. Hermione can't kill Harry. You said it yourself, she could use a confusion spell. That was so lame and stupid.

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I hated it!It made no sense!

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That was AWFUL. I only read the first three sentences and just couldn't go on. What were you thinking? DId you take English class? Not only was the writing bad, but the dialouge, the puncuation, the format. This story should be taken off of this site.

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That was the worst, and I mean worst story I have read in my life. I don't think there is another story worse than yours. Please, Harry Potter being gay? Don't you think that's a little bit extreme. Why it stunk was... 1. Spelling mistakes. 2. Harry beng gay 3. All those slahes 4. Harry dead. 5. And all the characters being OOC, in case if you don't know what that means it means out of character. Sorry if you think this review is harsh, btu I'm just telling you the truth. Kimberly*Grace

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That was the worst, and I mean worst story I have read in my life. I don't think there is another story worse than yours. Please, Harry Potter being gay? Don't you think that's a little bit extreme. Why it stunk was... 1. Spelling mistakes. 2. Harry beng gay 3. All those slahes 4. Harry dead. 5. And all the characters being OOC, in case if you don't know what that means it means out of character. Sorry if you think this review is harsh, btu I'm just telling you the truth. Kimberly*Grace

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if you are going to write stories for people to read, i suggest you learn how to spell and format a story.

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if you are going to write stories for people to read, i suggest you learn how to spell and format a story.

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i dont like this story who goes and kills their best friend because hes gay

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Harry dies? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO(one eternity later) OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

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AAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE MAKE HARRY GAY! STOP MAKING HIM GAY! JEEZE! WHAT IS IT WITH YOU PEOPLE TRYING TO MAKE HARRY POTTER GAY ?! STOP DOING THAT YOU JUST MAKE ME SO MAD! AND I DIDN\'T LIKE THE STORY AT ALL BACAUSE YOU MADE HARRY GAY AND THEN YOU KILLED HIM! STOP IT!!!!!!!!!

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HUH? WHAT JUST HAPPENED? HARRY\'S FRIENDS COULD HAVE HELPED ALIVE, NOT DEAD! HIS MUM DIED SO HE COULD LIVE! NOT SO THAT HIS BEST FRIEND COULD ----KILL----- HIM! I\'M CONFUNDED, REALLY! *WOLF*

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why would harry\'s best friends do that to him? I really can\'t see Ron and Hermione wanting to change him. Had they cared so much what he was like, wouldn\'t they have ditched him when they found out he was a parselmouth?

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sad funny what ever read it excelent ! well i\'m your friend so i posse ta

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ok that made zero sense. from what was spelled correctly, i got that hermione killed harry because he was gay?? what the censored is that about??? im not gay or anything, im straight, but that seems a lil prejudice to me. and a beta reader would suit you best.

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You may want a beta-reader... There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Including the title. It\'s Death, not Deth.

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