6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RemusBlack Nightmares

15th July 2006:
Hey there! That`s a great beginning of the story! But i found some small mistakes and thought you`d like to correct them:

If I’m going to die, I’m not going down with a fight.’ - without
It was after she had caught her breath, the girl noticed something. - ..., that the girl
The girl gave a groaned at this. - groaned at this
Careful not to get cut but the glass, - by the glass

Whatever, I just want to help you improve (I`m not a perfectionist but something close to it and`I can`t help but think others are too. So please don´t hate me ;O) Now I`m goin to go on reading. I already like the story a lot! :OD

Author's Response: No worries. I'm a bit of a prefectionist myself. At least with a stories content, my grammer isn't the best obviously : P
Thanks for pointing out those mistakes! I'll definatly look into fixing them!

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Review #2, by April Nightmares

18th March 2006:
Are you still updating this? I really hope so, I love this story so far.

Author's Response: Yep! And glad you like it!

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Review #3, by IchigoPan Nightmares

21st January 2006:
Hey Cassandra! I just realized that you had a story out and I love how you started this one out with such a dark dream! The running, the fear, it was very lucid! The funny thing with Cassia running back to her bed like a 'flock of winged demons were after her' is that I used to do that when I was a kid. I can't help but wonder that description you wrote is also a foreshadow of what's to come...

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Review #4, by red_envy Nightmares

16th November 2005:
mi gusta... I like this very much. Then intro was very captavating.. it drug me in, and I couldnt stop reading.. Keep it up! :D

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Review #5, by Allie102189 Nightmares

13th November 2005:
I like it a lot so far...okay im off to read the next chapters

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Review #6, by SummerFrost Nightmares

15th October 2005:
Hhhmmm....I like it so far. I haven't time to read more right now. I have a volleyball tournament soon!!!! I really love how descriptive you are! I could picture things quite easier...Something my readers want me to do a bit more of. :) I'll read more as soon as I can. Wish my team luck!!!! We're really hoping to win!!!! Peace!! :D

Author's Response: Good Luck on your volleyball Tournament! And I wish your Team a lot of luck! And thank you SO MUCH for the review.

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