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10 Reviews Found

Review #1, by aks_potter Finley Going home

12th November 2008:
good one.. well written.. nice plot..

keep writing.. ciao

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Review #2, by DracoAries Finley Going home

26th December 2005:
I love this story. It is so sad, still beautiful. I just love it. Write more.

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Review #3, by dreamsnz Memories

17th August 2005:
I love this story, it's so fun! write more!

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Review #4, by Moony01 Finley Going home

17th June 2005:
Oh my god... this is a great story! i'm gonna cry! you really are a good writer. but one thing, u shud use more conjunctions in the dialouge. like instead of: "It says here that he does not want to intrude on our lives. He is afraid that he will not be welcome." u shud write: "It says here that he doesn't want to intrude on our lives. he's afraid that he won't be welcome." see? it sounds more natural tht way. but other then that its an awesome story!!! i LOVED it!!

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Review #5, by JAM Finley Going home

10th June 2005:
Awwwwwww I loved your story!!! Your story was really really good! Tear jerker. I loved it!

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Review #6, by JAM Darkest before the Dawn

10th June 2005:
Harry how can you be such a prat! Good chapter!

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Review #7, by JAM The letter

9th June 2005:
Awwwwww, the letter was beutiful! Will he come back to them?? POSt More Soon!

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Review #8, by JAM Spotted

9th June 2005:
Ron you should have said something! Poor Ron and Ginny. This si a really good story! POst More Soon!

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Review #9, by JAM The red head hero

9th June 2005:
Will Ron come back??? Psot MORe SOon!

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Review #10, by JAM Memories

2nd June 2005:
Awwww.......that is sooo sweet! Poor Ron and Hermione!

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