good one.. well written.. nice plot.. keep writing.. ciao Report Review
I love this story. It is so sad, still beautiful. I just love it. Write more. Report Review
I love this story, it's so fun! write more! Report Review
Oh my god... this is a great story! i'm gonna cry! you really are a good writer. but one thing, u shud use more conjunctions in the dialouge. like instead of: "It says here that he does not want to intrude on our lives. He is afraid that he will not be welcome." u shud write: "It says here that he doesn't want to intrude on our lives. he's afraid that he won't be welcome." see? it sounds more natural tht way. but other then that its an awesome story!!! i LOVED it!! Report Review
Awwwwwww I loved your story!!! Your story was really really good! Tear jerker. I loved it! Report Review
Harry how can you be such a prat! Good chapter! Report Review
Awwwwww, the letter was beutiful! Will he come back to them?? POSt More Soon! Report Review
Ron you should have said something! Poor Ron and Ginny. This si a really good story! POst More Soon! Report Review
Will Ron come back??? Psot MORe SOon! Report Review
Awwww.......that is sooo sweet! Poor Ron and Hermione! Report Review
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