Very well written. I loved it
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The letter that lily gave to rhia made me cry. Another well written chapter
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This chapter was absolutly wonderful.
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I LOVED this chapter. Lily really shocked me though kissing Sirius to make James mad.
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This story made me laugh. Most people showed lily as a sweet little thing but you showed her as nice but mocking. Why did you abandon it this is sooo well written.

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Just wanted to review this fic to say I LOVE IT! Lily is characterized so well ...

Thank you,

kaylee

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OK I love it so much. And you really, really need to update before we all die. Don't hook up Lily and James too fast, the chase is the best part. :)

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i know i havent reeviewed the other chapters but i thought it wud be more worth it if i just got them read (mee to eager to finish your story) and left one big review telling you how much of an amzing writer and how much i want you to keep writing for the next 3 years of their life because i love this story so much :D there i am "stroking your ego" lol

i love the competetions btw gr8 idea

i love the mirror of erised i love the relationship between them all

i love the characterizations

i love you writing

i love this story

but most of all i love you for writing it (would of been very bored otherwise)

10/10

AWESOME

DOM xx

Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews. It is highly appreciated. :)

This story is being rewritten to fit canon. The new story is in my profile. Same title, different banner and summary. Thanks for enjoying the original.

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wow so your gonna reply eventually i cant wait lol

gr8 chapter and cunning plan ith the truth or dare thing lol :D

loved it 10/10

Dom x

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i would of liked some details of the attack of like james and sirius duelling tht wud of been kool

gr8 agen

dom x

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Still great :D still love it i best stop now before i get sacked :|

thaqnks for a gr8 read

10/10 Dom x

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as always i always review still great its very interesting read :D

i keep gettin in to trouble at work for readin though now i blame you so i want a full written apology :)

Dom x

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that was well strange :S but a gr8 idea with the masquerade i have a feeling this is gonna get interstin cant wait fantastic

Dom x

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i always review everytime i read :) but i onli found this couple weeks ago id like to get a response from u so i know u appreciate it :)

gr8 story

dom x

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its expecto patronum not patronus. and u mis spelled pyjamas lol

just little things i noticed i like how u had sirius defeated at the spell because of his past and that none of them got it first time its realistic gr8 chapter

Dom x

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u were right gr8 balance in the chapter still love it i hope u are reading my reviews or it is a wasted effort

10/10!

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GREAT ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS CHARACTERIZATIONS ARE PERFECT
10/10
Dom x

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bum de bummm o spark between remy wolfe and red evans :D hehe i love this story its really long but im actually looking forward to reading everyword thts an acheivement i normally avoid longer stories because i havent the patience i prefer one shots but ur story is amazingly fantasticly amazin when my stories up give it a read or sumthin :D thnks

dom x

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u give away too much in ur summaries at the end just a little too much but still makes ya wanna read without them ur see ur story can hold its own without end of chap summaries

love the story luv

Dom
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i love you story but i never get review responses so i dont know how u feel bout my reviews or if u even acknowledged their existense lol but i hope u did cos ur an awesome rumour :D

dom
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lol its very good i do like it u characterize dumbledoe well but lily is meant to be the potions queen andit seems strange to have her thinking shes bad and tht she hates it

still very good

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i know youve already continued but id say defo its gr8 :D
i will read it all within time will take a while though

plus i like to say im sure it was deliberate but slughorn was potion master while they were at school and head of slytherin

seems weird to portray lily as big headed from time to ime dont suit her but its ur story lol :) i still like it ur a gr8 writer u describe things so vividly well done

Dom
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OMG I love this story, update it soon please. It took me 2 days to read but I think it is great. Everything about it is fab. I love the diary and last paragraph, it gives an amaing effect!
So update soon, it will make my day


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you know wht would be absolutely and completely amazing? an update. yes...it would...i know your trying to balance two different stories, but even a little 500 worder would be amazing to tide us faithful reviewers over until you update a larger chapter. plez?

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Hey, i'm a new reader and i've just manged to make my way through all 25 of your chapters, and truthfully I want more!! you're a fantastic writer your story is so meaningful yet funny at the same time. i love the little parts at the end and the banter between Sirius and Lily always makes me smile. this is definetly my favourite story!! can't wait for more, keep up the good work!

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