I thought this was a cute song fichaha.. i guess cutes not the best word... touching maybe? yeah well anyway, I liked it.
Xxjess Report Review
I was really happy to see a songfc not using the song Broken by Seether. Anyways good story, I really liked it. It you like Seether be on the lookout for my story using the song Love Her.
~Alex Report Review
This is really good! Great insight! Report Review
That was sooooooooo awesome!!!! Report Review
So sad, yet, makes the blood boil with anger when you think about what Moldy-Voldy-Pants did to Sirius and Lily and James.
I like it!Author's Response: hehe Moldy Voldy Pants, eh? Glad you liked it!! Report Review
That was definitely a tear jerker! I totally feel for Harry and I knew that somehow he would get the courage to fight back at the end of the fic (and probably just get revenge for now). I like how you brought James and Lily into this because it showed his feelings about not having any parental figures anymore, and that's what he needs right now. I really don't have anything to critic so I'll just point out something about the lyrics. Maybe you could italicize them so it's easier to read through and distinguish from the lyrics and the actual writing. That's all I have to say for now. It was a wonderful and sad songfic. Keep writing!Author's Response: thanks for review! I'll definiatly italisize now! Report Review
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