{reviewid: 2318431, reviewer: 'Brittnii'}
22nd March 2010:
that is pretty great keep going
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{reviewid: 2056540, reviewer: 'MoonyandProngs'}
15th February 2009:
I liked it but I don't see why Ron should be mad since Harry wasn't returning Hermione's gaze.
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{reviewid: 1971466, reviewer: 'jayda'}
24th October 2008:
short but i wanna read more
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{reviewid: 1498649, reviewer: 'rears'}
5th July 2007:
Huh? Um okay, you need punctuation because it is hard to understand. But i like the plot.
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{reviewid: 1409493, reviewer: 'MsPotter'}
7th May 2007:
umm if u dont do punctuation, noone would understan. i had to read this slowly.lol.
good triangle!!
keepw ritting, and take some good proper grammar
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{reviewid: 1408351, reviewer: 'tonksloveswerewolves'}
6th May 2007:
this is...terrible.
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{reviewid: 869483, reviewer: 'simone'}
22nd January 2006:
make your next chapter longer please. great start!
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{reviewid: 433457, reviewer: 'HPfan'}
28th March 2005:
Please be less complicated when writing!Too hard to follow! Write more! All in all, great plot!
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{reviewid: 420702, reviewer: 'Jesszzz'}
19th March 2005:
Your chapter is way to short and you have to include punctuation and captilzation. I like the idea but you are lacking and deatails and as I said befor your chapters are way to short.
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{reviewid: 315534, reviewer: 'briege%20mccrory'}
1st January 2005:
for how short it is it is very good, i am a big H/Hr shipper so i would loves 2 read more. this 2 me seems more of a summary. plz write more!!
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{reviewid: 315533, reviewer: 'briege%20mccrory'}
1st January 2005:
for how short it is it is very good, i am a big H/Hr shipper so i would loves 2 read more. this 2 me seems more of a summary. plz write more!!
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{reviewid: 153240, reviewer: 'huh%3F'}
16th May 2004:
uh.No offense but this a bit short to be writng a review to and while I don't really aprove of the whole Hermione Ron Harry love triangle you seem to be pretty good at writing but you can't just write a paragraph and ask if anyone likes it because there really isn't enough there to determine if anyone does.On the other hand while you DEFENITELY need to include punctuation and capitalization I can clearly see that you have talent writing in the third person omnicient standpoint but need to include more details. P.S. the one is because you need to have more text in a chapter but it was still a great paragraph.
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{reviewid: 89617, reviewer: 'jamie'}
28th December 2003:
i think that if you write a few more chapters your story will be one of the best 'love trangle' stories on this site but don't loose he plot, it's good so far
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{reviewid: 84369, reviewer: 'Mella_N'}
7th December 2003:
This sucks
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{reviewid: 52475, reviewer: 'hmm'}
18th July 2003:
Why is it that most of the people posting stories to this site seem to be totally illiterate?
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{reviewid: 44434, reviewer: 'yuna'}
2nd June 2003:
verry good
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{reviewid: 39001, reviewer: 'Anon'}
4th March 2003:
Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation, Write more, put in punctuation. Otherwise, nice job.
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{reviewid: 38930, reviewer: 'Anon'}
3rd March 2003:
Put in punctuation, make your chapters longer, and establish a plot.
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{reviewid: 34794, reviewer: 'Anon'}
27th December 2002:
i don't get it...
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{reviewid: 33912, reviewer: 'Katlynn%20Kitson'}
26th November 2002:
Hey! I liked it, but I hope that you write a little more in the next chapter. Hope Harry and Mione get together soon. Forget about Cho. I really hate her.
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{reviewid: 33911, reviewer: 'Katlynn%20Kitson'}
26th November 2002:
Hey! I liked it, but I hope that you write a little more in the next chapter. Hope Harry and Mione get together soon. Forget about Cho. I really hae her.
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{reviewid: 33814, reviewer: ''}
18th November 2002:
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{reviewid: 33747, reviewer: 'cybershelb'}
15th November 2002:
MORE!!!!! NEED MORE!!!!! WRITE MORE OR ELSE!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 33743, reviewer: 'SpookyMulder'}
15th November 2002:
I like your love-circle, but without ANY punctuation it's incredibly annoying to read. Please add periods and commas! I would like to see what you do with it! PLease update!
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