I liked it. def WMSAuthor's Response: Thanks so much 4 reading now answer my question Report Review
its ok....fast paced...but ok. Im kinda confused 2....Author's Response: WOW amazing!! Report Review
Woo, so much going on! LOL, I feel a little dazed and confused myself ;) I liked it though, there were a few spelling mistakes, but overall it was good! :)Author's Response: hey i no i (andie) was 2! lol!!! Report Review
You asked me nicely to review so that's what i'm here to do :) okay, well you have some grammar mistakes and I'm wondering...do you have a plot? and it sort of feels rushed...if you need help like if you need someone to run ideas over with you can always come to me other then that keep working on it because i'm half sure this is the first thing you've written please dont let what I say get to you and I hope you continue to write!Author's Response: k i will thanks 4 ur advice Report Review
i'm good and let's make the next 1 soon.Plz read ya'll Report Review
hi me how r u? Report Review
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