Keep writing... it's good so far.

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hey shelby, its me rica :D need i tell you its good? your stories are ALWAYS awesome!!! i love it. more please :D. also, can you post your poem on the list thing? thx! ;) luv ya rica

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i love it!

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interestig ~want more,want more!~ please review do you think i care

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keep it going!! i wanna see why hes so sad!! this is a good good good story!! keep going!

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Well, it looks very good. Well done! I love the idea and I can\'t wait to read more *hint, hint*. The characters are developed but it doesn\'t give away the whole plot in one shot. Good to see you keep the reader hanging about what Oliver wants to say. Style is good and it flows well. Keep writing it or else I will send you nagging email after nagging email. Rayya.

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THIS WAS SO SHORT YET SO SWEET, u write brilliantly, please continue, and will u r/r my fic Harry Potter and the Marauders Book? My author name is MariaRiddle, pleez continue, i\'ll keep checking 4 u to update^_^!!

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Whoa. unique alright. love that. Cmon.. please write more shortly for me and other readers who enjoy this as much as l did:) thanks, Sherry

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Well written. I wanna read more! lol You have a few typos, but that\'s no big deal. I\'m gonna go check out your other story now . . .

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Cool! I love stories where the main charaters aren\'t major charaters from the books! I hope you update it soon! ~Katy

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