oh wow, I was seriously crying my heart out during the last few chapters,
10/10
kisses!
Lisa

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awww wow. how sweet and mature is that? i love it. don't know what to say...

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you aren't afraid to write maturely are you? that's good though. i think this is well written. well done be proud. i'll be back...soon

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ooo la la. lol this is a sweet story. you have attention to tiny details.. that's a good thing. the little girl for example. it's good that Hermione had somethign to trigger the thought of kids rather than it come out of the blue. well done. i am enjoying this.

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1st of all i love the flasbacks. not just the idea but what's in them too. it can be overlooked sometimes but when someone (regardless of if they are fictional or not) experiences something they remeber things. flashbacks = simple way of explaining. glad you haven't overlooked it.
wow still. welli haven't said wow yet but i meant to. i will be back to this story. sorry i know i'm not babbling like a said i would. but put it this way...
in my book if i want to carry on reading a story it's good! or even better than good lol keep it up! :)

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erm this won't be much of a review as i'm going to read the next chapter ... like now...
really well done!! lol i love Hermione and Ron fan fics so i can see that i'm going to like this. also it is well written and i normally blab (ask beyondtheveil) but i won't right now. i'll read one more chapter then blab.

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so cute!

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truly terrific. i was balling the entire time! welll done, well done!

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AW!
I wish you would go on with the story, this was so good!

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That was so beautiful

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I would've liked if Ron ha a natural sense for knowing when Hermione was alive, but good chapter.

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well thank god shes ok!
great story, really

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you almost made me cry
and that was treading on thin ice right there, if you didnt wake hermione up just then i would have actually cried

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i hate you
how dare you make ron suffer that way?

but also i love you, hermione is alive and lily will not start an evil revolution with malfoy's children due to a life of neglect and pain.
the fictional world is right once again

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i have already had one outburst at you this evening so now i shall only say, i really hope hermione is alive again soon and that harry and ginny dont hate ron forever if she is dead.

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hermione is not dead
because if she is ron will kill himself, and then lily will be parenless and harry and ginny will have to look after her and when ginny has her own child they will have to look after that one as well and lily will take a back seat because nothing copares to a mothers love for her child and lily is just not ginny's child so she'll grow up feeling unwanted and will be emotionally scared for life an probaby turn evil with malfoys children and a new revolution will begin and eveyone will die.

you see what this is doing to me? i'm being over dramatic and ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!
the story is still much too amazing though

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ok, i am very impressed by this story. sorry i havent reviewed until now, but i was too engrossed.
anyway seing as i am so impressed i shan't be oo harsh but... WHY DID MALFOY CRUCIO THE BABY! that is truly foul. i hate malfoy.
i shall now read on.

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I really like your story, plots, and such. I almost cried when I read this. Sometimes though, it's a bit hard to read because there are lots of grammatical and punctuation mistakes.

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Wow. U make me cry when u said that Hermione will dead. She did not yeah. @_@

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awwwww YAY

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“And you’ll never leave me, will you?” she asked him. Ron started at such an unusual question from her, then grinned at her.

“Till death do us part, remember?” Ron answered. Hermione smiled, that’s right, till death do us part.


AH I LOVE THAT PART! IT IS SO SWEET. THIS WHOLE STORY WAS SO SWEET. AH I LOVE IT. I'M GLAD IT ENDED LIKE IT DID AND THIS EARNS MY CHICK FIC SEAL OF APPROVAL. YES MOST DEFINATELY. =] =] =]

SO... I WILL BE READING YOUR OTHER STORIES AND I HOPE THERE IS SOME SORT OF A SEQUEL! YOU'RE A GREAT AUTHOR!

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yay for a second there i thought she was gone. but no, this is a chick fic, she would never die so suddenly. uh uh. no way. after a speak like that? no way. haha. likin the end

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yay im so happy that she isnt dead. however, this story could have involved what happened when she died. hmm i might write one like that. i posted one chapter of one and even though it was just an opening, i got one bad review and decided to never write fanfic again. i think it might be time to break out the old notebook. haha. anyhoo, back to your story. YAY iim soooo glad she isnt dead. ron is so brilliant and sweet. yay i love it. i added it to my favourites.

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yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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i am not mad because i know that even if you kill hermione, you will do it with ease and not make it too difficult for the readers. i really like all the fluff and i dont give fluffy compliments a lot. haha. well i love that ron is so determined it is really sweet. time for next chapter!

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