Aww....that was so inspiring. I was pretty curious about the title, but I think it's lovely. The story was short but sweet. I've never read a HP fanfic that was fully about feelings though. I think you have a great style of writing and I think you ought to write longer chapters. I'm sure that you are a good poet, because the story itself was pretty much poetic. So, why not try song-fics? Anyway, good job!

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Oh that was so beautiful. You are very talented at poetic writing. You should write maybe like a Hermione's point of view for this one. kinda like a sequel. That could be kind of cool. But that was very good.

Rating: 100 trillion-billion- big number!

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wow... that was truley awesome! one of the best angst one shots i have ever read! truely great stuff!

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it was great! im not sure if i really understand it. But it was so poetic that i loved it any way!

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Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my god. It is so beautiful! oh my god. I cried. I'm still crying! That is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read in my life. I'm being serious. I love the name. The name alone almost made me cry. Theres no other way to explain it. It's just beautiful...

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man i love this story...

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i love your title, where did you get the idea for it. and ive added this to my favourites, it shouldve worked. i think this is a beautiful oneshot, so much power in your words, maybe you could write another?

Author's Response: well the title just kind of came to my head when i was thinking about....stuff.... gonna go check your stuff out now, i think it's only fair ;-)

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that is absolutely beautiful. i could feel your soul, i felt your pain. it was so amazing to read, the feelings you put in there, the intensity is so great you feel so desperate for harry/you. i think he's talking of hermione, and she's going with someone else...ron is it?

Author's Response: wow, i'm glad you like it! yeah, harry's talking about hermione, although i'm not entirely sure she IS with ron at that point. i think she isn't, but harry knows it's only a matter of time. but i guess it's subjective, so... make up your own mind.

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That was very...one sided, lol. A really good pour your soul out one-shot that I don't have any criticisms for. Keep writing! :)

Author's Response: thanks for that. i did originally write it to pur out my own soul, so i'm glad that comes across.

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Wow. That is an original short and sweet. Really well written. You might want to say who you are talking about, though. Again, wow. ~ KR

Author's Response: awww *blushes* thanks! there was supposed to be an explanation with it, i'm not sure where it's gone. i'll do another.

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