awww :) what a sweet story!!!! Hope there's a sequel! Erm. You should have made it a *little* lnoger. And perhaps told us what happened to ""poor"" malfoy.
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Go Ron, Malfoy SUCKS! Report Review
hey, nice story. I absolutely love that song. one of my favourites. Thank u for your story.Author's Response: I love it to and I thought it would make a nice One-Shot. Tnx. =) Report Review
Sweet, but put a little more detail into it. "He hugged her and she got her stuff." That's not very descriptive, and kind of takes the emotion out of it a little bit. "He hugged her, it was like embracing rays of sunshine, and he thought that maybe things would be alright again. She turned..." blah blah blah. Something along those lines, be more of a romantic! Otherwise, good job.Author's Response: Thanx. Report Review
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