beautiful! i absolutely loved it! please write more! Report Review
I still don't know who it is!!!!!!!!!! It can't be Hermione because she sits with him in class. It can't be Ginny because she isn't in his year and she plays Quiuidditch. WHO?Author's Response: demelza robins. secretly i think she has a thing for harry. Report Review
that one was really, really good, but um whose the girl? by anychance is it Hermione?
kudos <3Author's Response: other people have asked me the same question and i'll be honest: i really don't know who the girl is! she's just somebody i imagined, though she does fit hermione's description. im glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Report Review
come on. what happens next. do they go out?Author's Response: he goes down on one knee, asks her to marry him, she accepts ( obviously, its harry potter), he gives her a beautiful heart cut diamond ring, they run away and get married and live happily ever after. then they go to potions class, where snape yells at them because theyre late and gives them both detention.
hahahhaha yeah sorry. i'm just a little hyper Report Review
The poem was real good.Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed it <3 Report Review
Awww. :) Sweet story.Author's Response: thanks! im glad you enjoyed it <3 Report Review
great story! by the way, who is the narrarator? it was great though!Author's Response: thanks! im glad you liked it. actually, i dont know who the narrarator was...i kind of made up my own character :) thanks for reviewing! <3 Report Review
Oh my goodiness, that was adorable. Great job on the writing, and wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it. Good job and Good Luck.
Lots of LoveAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it. I'll have more stories coming out, not just one-shots so check back. Thanks again! <3 Report Review
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