this is quite good, but i feel like i should know more about their past.Author's Response: yes, probably. this is a kinda old story of mine... i need to re edit it and stuff. Thanks tho, I'll keep that in mind. Report Review
i don't quite understand this. it mentions the order, so it must be after book 5. but why's sirius still alive? good so far anywayAuthor's Response: Ahh yes. suprisingly, you are the first person to mention this. see i had most of the story written before book 5. Then as I was editing, I added the order part. So yes, in theory, sirius should be dead, but if i took him out now, threre would be no story. hope that clears it up a little.. Report Review
This is a great story! I really like this and you need to put up a new chappie - just like on your other fic! Post more, TokenAuthor's Response: Thank you! and thanks for reviewing my other story as well! im glad you like them!!!~ s-k
p.s. im attempting to write the next part, however it isn't going so well... but don't worry, it will be up eventually : ) Report Review
Very good. Maybe you could add some more description of the OC. I can't get a good image of her in my head. I like the plotline so far. Update soon.Author's Response: Thanks, I probably should fix that... its hard for me to notice because i kno what she looks like... anyways Thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
Wow! that was good. I just love stories with SIrius in them. Poor guy.Author's Response: thanks. I like sirius too (im in denial about his death!!!) Report Review
i like your story! cant wait for chapter 2! alex's father isn't a certain rat we all hate, is it?Author's Response: actually no.but it will be really ovbious after the next chapter. thanks for the review!!! Report Review
i really like this so far um just one think is Alexes dad who i think it is ??? well plz update soon !!
Author's Response: hmmm.... maybe he is...
thanks for the review!!!! Report Review
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