great start. really enjoyable read. only one thing tho:'The fifty-year-old Headmaster' dumbledore was 150 in harry's first year-said so on the chocolate frog cards. just thought you ought to know. im such a nit-picker! Author's Response: i don't pay attention to those details and as far as I'm concerned, with how much different to the real story this will be, i don't think it matters much. I'm currently writing the "first" chapter and it should be out by tomorrow i hope so we'll see. Thank you. Report Review
I'm so glad that you listened to the idea I gave you.... That was the perfect ending to the prologue and it makes me want to read the next chapter!! Great job hun and I can't wait to read the story!!! ~beep~ Report Review
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