This story is really good. Too bad my wifi is taking forever and the next chapter isn't loading:(. Oh well it has to work sometime! Report Review
hahahahahaha. i laughed out loud during their little snowball fight... a piccolo? james, playing a piccolo. that is hilarious. also the kodak moment thing..
one of the funniest things i've ever read was when hermione, harry, and the weasleys were flying (on a airplane) somewhere for some reason. i dont remember exactly why.. but anyways they all put their wands in arthur weasley's suitcase, and when they were getting checked by security, the guy was a bit suspicious of the wands.. he asked what they were for, and arthur says something like, "Erm.. they're sticks! i collect nice sticks! I'm a stick collector!" and he was all nervous and stammering.. it was absolutely hilarious. i wish i remembered what that story was called... i never even finished it.
sorry, you probably don't care to read about other people's stories in a review on your story.. so anyways, I love this story! its funny and cute, but theres also scary parts.. its a perfect mix of everything. i love it. Report Review
this is an amazing fan fiction I loved every part of it! the rich language you use I feel like i am reading on of J.K. rowelling books! Report Review
BEAUTIFUL! That's all i can really say, but I love this story! =D
Cassie Report Review
Beautiful written! I love it all the chapters up to here! Report Review
omg omg omg omg omg! you don't even know how long it took me to refind this story! I've read it like 3 times before and somehow it got deleted off of my favorites =[ and I couldn't remember the name, but I could remember the entire plot line.
Anyway, I'm so happy I found it again and I love it to pieces! Report Review
yayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay! Report Review
Aww that was such a sweet story, really nice! Report Review
i like your story! :) really nice! your sequal looks cool too, but i have to finish this story before i can read that one. nice work! Report Review
oh my god that was simply amazing, breath-taking... i LOVED YOUR STORY. it made me want to cry, laugh and never stop reading.good job ... ill be keeping an eye for your following work Report Review
keep writing Report Review
just a note-draco's grandfather(or lucius' father)'s name was Abraxas Malfoy
AND I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! Report Review
that has got to be one of the best stories i have ever read! Report Review
I'm sorry that I didn't review from the beginning but I was really into the story and just realized when I finished that I didn't review!
It was amazing, I only wish I could write half as good.
omg ur story was absolutly amazing!! u r an exellent writer u shud do it profesionally!! this book shud be published im being serious!
i love it! thanx Report Review
This is real interesting!! I love the torment Report Review
I love Lucius' character Report Review
This is one of the best 1st chapters I've read!! Report Review
Your writing is so formal -- it's unnerving! Report Review
awww that's soo adorable lol ^_^ ~Sarah~ Report Review
By the way, on the last reating I meant to give you a 10. sorry. Report Review
one word, Awsome! its totally great an I only read the 1st chapter! I can't wait to read more. Report Review
That was SO beautiful, your characterisations were fantastic! You sustained the characters, you get a ten! Report Review
eyes r glued to screen ibn horror, having to touch type, AAAAHHHHHHHHH! Report Review
Nice shouting match, and Lucius was very wrong to even thimk of hitting Lorena, duhbrain idiot that he is! Report Review
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