Good first chapter..but it was too short for me. You write well maybe you should include more descriptions to make the reader involved in the story.Author's Response: The beginning is especially short. I am simply too short on time to give the long chapters that I wish I could. It gets a little longer later. Thank you for reading! Report Review
Nooooo...Not a cliffhanger....How cruel! lol....Cool story! Keep on writing!!! I can't wait to read more!!! *grin*...(NB: Why do you say we shouldn't trust what you say in author's note?)Author's Response: Haha! I am a very devious author. I try to mirror JKR in letting nothing I say be set in stone, one way or the other. If I say something, you shouldn't always take me seriously or believe that it is true. I do have more of the story on mugglenet right now if you want to read on. My updating might be a little slow here. Thanks for reading! Report Review
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