that was wonderful! you did a realy good job with going back and forth with their thoughts. i realy like it, good job!

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I really enjoyed this story. All too often you read over dramaticized pieces about the couples, this simple piece about a small "inconsequential" touch says way more. I loved this piece and hope you write more in this simple style. :)

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Oh, that was amazing. I know it's not canon, but I wish it were ;o)

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oh my gosh! that was- to use one of Ron's favorite phrases- bloody brilliant!

i love how real that scene is!

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Aah, that was adorable! I love it! Hermione/Ron stuff is so cute! I think I'll go check out some more of your stuff now (if there is any, I don't really know)...

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loved it! great job

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as i've said before, you're awesome and you have a special talent for writing! keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review seamusluver! I really appreciate all of your comments. Thanks.

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Very good.

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Very good! You have an exceptional talent for description and I thought this short fic was so romantic.

A couple of picky comments and I'll be done :) First off it was hard to read that one paragraph... the one that started, "Hermione had just turned to look..." I did get the point which was really cute but I'd like to see it spaced out a little more. I also didn't get why they were in a telephone booth of all places. Please make that more clear.

Other than that good job! It's great how you can take something so mundane and make it so enjoyable. :) Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the very well thought out review TheOne, it is greatly appreciated. Aaahhhh, after rereading the paragraph you mentioned, I find it hard to space it out, I find that everything flows so nicely, but I'll take a closer look at that later. The reason they are in a telephone booth is because this short fic is supposed to be an excerpt from The Order of The Phoenix, when the DA is entering the Ministry of Magic through the telephone booth. Anywho, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Thanks again! :)

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Ah! Very, very good! And so relistic. I can so see this actually happening!
You kept the characters very well, and kept me hooked thinking "What's going to happen" Very good.
--Phoenixx--

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that was good

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Wow! That was good, ok i need to tell you want i liked, as i good reviewer... ummm.... ok i'm starting to turn into a girl ron...ok I liked: -How you did the POV of Ron and Hermione -How you really painted a picture in MY mind -How you made it seem so happy -That you back-tracked in the story to let me know when they thought what (((Thaks! That story was ROCKIN AWESOME!!)))

Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review Pink_Princess12! I'm so glad to see a review where the person tells me specifically what they liked about the story. Thanks so much!

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yay! cute!

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(sniff) it gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside (sniff)

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Awesome... that was brilliant. I loved that.. lol... I could say that all day!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review TabbyCat! I really appreciate it! :)

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DUMB 1!

Author's Response: Ahhhh, not very nice at all! I would actually respect your review and care that you said that if you explained why you thought it was, and I quote "DUMB 1!".

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Kl, gd story

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Please write more! Why did you stop there, it was going so great?

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Melodie! This was just an excerpt from chapter 34 of Order of the Phoenix, sorry, but that's all I'll be writing for this one. Thanks again! :)

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Will you post a sequel that's Ron's and Hermione's POV during the actual action? Or something else totally different? I just really want a sequel. I'd write one, but...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review jack23. Lol, I wasn't planning on writing a sequel. If you were to write a sequel, I would be totally fine with it. You can even send it by me so that I can edit it or something. And you'll probably have to write a disclaimer or something, but just run it by me first. I'm actually flattered that you want to write a sequel! Thanks again for the review. Contact me, if you have any questions. Thanks :)

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that was goood.

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Awww, that woz so sweet. i wonder if sumthin like that really happened? i hope it did. but it woz a fantastic story.

Author's Response: Hey, again, to you Ramla. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it! I hope something like this happened too! Thanks!

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It was great. Lot of spoilers for Order of the Phoenix though!

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tht was soooo sweet. i really liked it in fact, i love it!!!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks lizzy for the kind review. I'm gald you liked it!

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deserves more

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It was adorable!

Author's Response: Thanks MissBrunette, glad you liked it!

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