are you donr writing that chapter yet. IM WAITING!!!! ;(

Author's Response: *dodges flying objects* Sorry... not done yet. But it's a good thing people keep reminding me. :D

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are you done with the chapter yet????please,please huurrrryy!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *sigh* I'm trying to. It's just gotten a bit difficult. I'll try to get it done some time soon.

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please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will, don't worry. I've already started the chapter.

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love this! please tell me you're still continuing! snape is my all-time favorite character, and it's hard to find a good romance fic with him! ; )

Author's Response: I've already started writing the next chapter. I hope I can update soon. Thanks for the review.

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I just read these four chapters again and I love it even more! The kiss was written so entrancingly, it just makes you want to read more! Just thought I'd tell you. Keep up the good work ;)

Author's Response: Argh. I know I should write. I'm just so caught up in so many other things and stories. Ok. I have one and a half chapters to write for other stories and then I#ll write chapter five of this one, ok?

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woohoo! I'm so glad you're not quitting! :D take all the time you want just don't take too long , please:/ However, Just knowing that you're not quitting is enough.. for now ;)

Author's Response: Thanks. Unfortunately that job is killing me at the moment, because I have a spell of insane head ache every evening. I hope that will change over the next few days. But, I'll try. Thanks for the encouragement.

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hey I wanted to know if you are going to continue writing this story, I really, really hope you will because this is probably one of the best snape/you fics I've ever read on this site!

Author's Response: Yup. I will continue. Give me some time, though, because I have a really time consuming job at the moment. But I've already started the next chapter, so it will certainly come. Thanks for thecompliment. :)

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ah so the girl is Denise Richards, hmmm your right, shes very pretty, it was a good choice, i would also like you to know, that i would be more then happy to critique your writing if you continue to do this story, i like the direction its in, just beware not to make it overally cheesey and sappy, thqat sometimes happens if the desired couple "gets together" to soon... be sure to throw a bit of angst in there so that the peak moment of passion is at a suspense level to get the most out of the moment... after all, its Snape, both of them have to have at least some misgivings... goodluck, and i will sign mine ~M.A. from now on, lol

Author's Response: Oh, thanks a lot. Not to worry. The angst will come. I had bnever intended this to bevcone angsty until Istarted writing it, but I'm not entirely for sappy love stories myseld, so... well. I just started writing chapter five yesterday and I hope I'll have it done soon. Thanks for reviewing.

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WOW. I loved it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try to update asap.

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Great chapter. Yes the first Sevvie hotness, it was good though. Didn't give away too much. LOL. Great story!

Author's Response: Yeah, well. We'll want to approach slowly... *lol*

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Pretty good so far. Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: No worries, I will.

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i really like this story as well, it has a nice originality to it, and the kiss was very cute. I like the banner to, who is the women? obviously the man is the acter who plays Snape, but who is the girl? She fits well, i like how she is kinda chewing on her hair, it fits the character

Author's Response: OMG. Glad that you like it. The girl is Denise Richards. I saw that picture and i thought she was just so pretty. And yeah, I swear I loved writing the kiss. :)

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oh they kissed that's so sweet. I liked this chapter it was really nice update soon I love to read them

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll try to update asap.

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Its intoxicating. Intriguing conversations and good choice in clothing. I love it and hope you update soon! Ciao

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I'll try to get the neyt chapter out soon.

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great story just love it. nice can't wait for your next chapter to be updated hope that it's soon

Author's Response: I'll try to post chapter four soon.

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a be-a-utiful chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thanks. As it is, I'm just in the middle of writing chapter four, so stay tuned.

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she's cool :p I like your story :-)

Author's Response: Yeah, I wish i was that cool. My OCs are always much more cool than I am. *LOL*

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it's very good for a first chapter :) it's interesting :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I hoped it would be.

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great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot.

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Whoo, something I haven't already read coming soon (hopefully) I don't suppose I need to say this but I will anyay. This chapter was great and I can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: Good. I'll try to get it up soon. Hey, you know what. This chapter was only in limbo for about twelve hours. WHOHO

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I really liked this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. :)

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um this story is very good so far i hope she speaks to snape soon plz update soon !!!

Author's Response: Chapter three is already up and it's already validated. i can hardly belive it. Oh, and yes.... she does talk to Sevvie.

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Yeah, it's ridiculous how long stories stay in Limbo for. I'll definately stay tuned for the next one, I can't wait to read it, (even though I've already donw so :p)

Author's Response: Yeah, well... it's going to continue.

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great chapter. Update soon. Also all the staring snape is doing is creepy.

Author's Response: Ah, I love a staring Snape. Whatever, I'm glad you like it. I'll get the next chapter out soon.

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It's so good.Great chapter,did it very well.update soon

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I also really enjoy writing this story. It's my favourite story to write at the moment.

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