Wow, that is really amazing. You have a great style of writing. And just... wow. Great story. Report Review
woah- one thing about your stories, you grab the readers attention from the first few lines.
'Harry sighed heavily as walked into the boys’ dormitory, he had just lied to his best friends. He told them he was just going to grab his wand, and said it was unwise to just leave it lying on his bed. They believed him and headed down to the great hall for dinner.'
excellent intro; i feel the reader becomes invested in this story from those three lines on...and it just gets better and better. i like how you reveal little by little in the third paragraph...i was shocked that harry would take his life-not really characteristic of him, however, you made it believable with the rest of the story.
i have never read slash, and i didn't realise this was slash until i read it. if your writing wasn't so good i wouldn't have finished reading. i really felt draco's emotions- it was so sad. nice job with this.
Author's Response: That's really sweet of you! thank you very much for the nice review and I'm very glad you gave my story a fighting chance. thanks again. Report Review
Slash isn't really my style but I think that you are an amzing author. And you got out all the emotions brilliantly!
~AlyAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading my story even though you don't like slash. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a TON for the R&R! Report Review
That was really sad even I cried I really didn't care that they were gay at all, but it was still good. If you want you can reach me by e-mailing me at firstname.lastname@example.org.Author's Response: WOw, I'm really glad you liked it. I'm glad you could over look their sexuality as well. It really isn't a big deal. Thank you very very much for the R&R Report Review
OMG! Why are your one shots so heartbreaking!!??Author's Response: I don't really know... I guess it's just my style.
Thank you very much for the r&r! Report Review
Okay, I'm not a big fan of slash, its just...yeah. Anyway, this is different, this is really good, and well written. Well done!
9 out of 10!Author's Response: Thank you SO MUCH for all of your kind reviews! Report Review
WHAT THE ( BEEP) IS WRONG WITH U???? HARRY GAY??? LIKE COME ON I DIDNT EVEN FINISH READING THIS STORY LIKE COME ON !!!!!!!!! I DONT LIKE UR STORY
I STILL CANT BELIEVE U WROTE THIS!!!!
kel Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like it, however this was my story and that is how I decided to tell it. thanks for the review none the less. Report Review
OKay this is one of the most depressing things i have ever read! *tear* it's sad, but that says something. It says it's good if it makes me feel this emotional. Keep up the good work, i'm gonna go run away and cry......lol. ~KatAuthor's Response: Well I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I am sorry that it made you sad but if you liked it, it was worth it. thank you! Report Review
Im not usually a big fan of slash stories, but I have to say, this one was really good & sad. Great work!Author's Response: yay I'm glad this one. I greatly appreciate the review! Report Review
There were a few grammatical errors, but I did enjoy reading this. You could have added a little more depth to it and you could also have been more descriptive with each scene before moving on to the next. Overall, though, I like it. It was nicely done. <3Author's Response: thank you very much! Report Review
aww thats so sad. i like it. although the process of draco remembering should have been longer. maybe a flashback or something.Author's Response: I've been considering a prequal... like how they got together, where all the things in the box came from, the other suicide notes he left. Thank you much for reading and the review! Report Review
Aww..this was such a sweet story, except the fact that Harry dies *sobs*. Much better than my slash...
~Alex.Author's Response: lol thanks a ton I'm glad you liked it. I'll read youre story I bet you're just being modest ^_^ Report Review
really good, well written, but question, why did he have to? theres always ways of getting over things.....i should know, but anyways, really good.Author's Response: He had to because I am a twisted little person lol. Appently you suffered a loss.. sorry about that, hope you feel better. And thanks a ton for the review. Report Review
Oh My God... that was incredible. it was so sad... my eyes started to fill with tears. it is an excellent story.Author's Response: thank you very very much! Report Review
I really like how you have the story structured. The fact theat you have a harry and draco relationship (even if it's only mentioned) is neat i never thought of that. I like the story it's niffy!Author's Response: thanks! lol Harry and Draco are my fav couple... i have NO idea why. but thanks again! Report Review
Oh my god!! That was so sad and sweet! I loved it!
You're an amazing writer!Author's Response: *blush* thank you very much. Report Review
Wow, definatly a twist there. Especially after reading 'you'. Still and excellent story. You deal with some pretty heavy themes and you do it with a style to. Full credits. Author's Response: lol yes, they are deff. two different completly different stories.. thank you very much I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
gasp! wow. why cant -i- write like that?Author's Response: thank you very much, i appreciate it. Report Review
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