wish this had been continued, shows great potential would have loved to see your concept of the potion receipe for the elixor of life

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Don't get me wrong, I do like the fanfic. Why the hell though, is this classified as a "crossover", when it is in fact NOT. "Virtual Hogwarts" may NOT be canon for the Harry Potter series, but it in fact is fanon. It is like labeling a fanfic that is simply a continuance of someone elses fanfic in the HP genre as a crossover.

Obviously, this fanfic is a self-insert RPG type fanfic. It goes nowhere, so I am rather glad it was only a one-shot. To many of these go into multiple chapters and have barely anything to do with the actual canon, it isn't funny. This was filled with a nice amount of crack humor and it doesn't go on, and on, and on, and on...

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I suck

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I'm afraid I didn't understand it...whatsoever. It was well written, but what era was this set in?? *shugs* I liked the ending!Lol...

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Ok, if I'm honest, I didn't really understand most of it, but it did seem to be well-written...

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that was alright, its cool how u set it in australia :) not many ppl bother... i liv in australia, and i never see kangaroos except once or twice in the bush and in the zoo, but its funny how everyone thinks that they're everwhere down here :D

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that was alright, its cool how u set it in australia :) not many ppl bother... i liv in australia, and i never see kangaroos except once or twice in the bush and in the zoo, but its funny how everyone thinks that they're everwhere down here :D

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ok that was really stupid....... what the hell did that have to do with harry potter?

Author's Response: This was written a while ago and was based on Virtual Hogwarts, which is based on Harry Potter canon. I do believe I mentioned that in my disclaimer.

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nice.i would like to ask;is elizabeth me?haha

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Not bad. I liked it being set in Australia - home sweet home! But just a slight problem with the technical details we do not have kangaroos and wallabies hopping around all over the place. At least not in suburbia. I\'ll let you off though since you were near the bush (where you might get them hopping around all over the place.) No, really, it was great. Not too long and not too short. You covered everything well and kept me interested even though it\'s late at night when I should be asleep. Well done and keep writing. Rayya

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