Can it get better?
Your writing is (lack of better word) immaculate, it really makes me ponder. Each chapter brings a new twist, a new question and something even more jaw dropping than the last, you use sutilty in your writing which is much better than giving away the whole plot in the first paragraph.
Truly original and well though out. Report Review
Wow, i absolutely love this story so far. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. This is so interesting it has me totally hooked. Keep those chapters coming. See Ya!! Report Review
I like it. It's original and obviously thought out. I think the characters could have their personalties developed more in the next chapters - they seem a little flat right now. I love the way Luna flusters Hermione and I'm glad Ginny likes it to:) Report Review
Hey there ... I read this over on Foreverfandom. I loved it then awell. Awesome start - can't wait to read more *Nina* Report Review
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