4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Demius Lupin The Fateful Night

21st July 2005:
I'm finished reading every chapter! That was a good story but the slashes kinda gave me a headache!

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Review #2, by ev the phoenix Prologue

5th May 2004:
hi, um, I'm on the first chapter of your story and cannot continue, because of the lack of grammer, and the forward slashes! they are very anoying, and have no meaning in your story, I sugest that you learn how to punctuate your writing prperly. I'm sory, but I would have liked this story, but I cannot continue. I give this effort a one.

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Review #3, by PriscillaRyu Prologue

26th April 2003:
Hmm... interesting... i like it!! Anxious to read more!! It\'s good... please continue!

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Review #4, by Nelson Prologue

16th April 2003:
WHO IS OUT THE DOOR!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!!!!!! sorry. i like his story. more please!

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