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Review #1, by nott theodore The Light at the End of the Tunnel

14th July 2013:
This is a really poignant and moving one-shot! I can't understand why it only has one review, but especially for a first fan fiction story, it's a very good job!

I really liked the premise of this story, even if it is very sad. After all we've seen our characters go through in the books, I just want them to have a happy ending and live happily ever after. But of course, part of the legacy of the war is the grief and the mourning that goes with it, and that's what you showed brilliantly here. The memories that run through Harry's mind in these moments are well chosen and effective.

The only CC I have would be to suggest you use shorter paragraphs, as big blocks of text can sometimes be very intimidating to the reader. Overall, a lovely story!

Sian :)

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Review #2, by darkageruler The Light at the End of the Tunnel

28th April 2005:
That's sad, but really really good!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Got a lot of work to do but it's a start.

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