I loved this story, especially how you made Sirius still have his sense of humor even with the situation he has to deal with. You know what you could do? Instead of having this as a one shot you could do something along the lines of being tortured and captured with different characters, like Lily, James, Remus and anyone else you might feel like. I think it'd be kind of cool, did that make any sense at all? Report Review
I love your fics! They are so true to the character's thoughts, and this is no different. (I mean, it's different, but...well, you know what I mean.) :-) I especially loved the tender ending to this, the reality and the human emotion. This was great to read, especially since I had no idea that the Death Eater was Malfoy! The dialogue was perfect. Excellent work on this! Author's Response: Thank you! The "tender ending" was unintentional. I didn't know how I was going to end it and it just came out. Sigh. I'm a sickeningly optimistic person and I don't think it works well with some of these stories. Oh well. I'm glad you liked it. And I thought you'd enjoy the Malfoy part. Thank you SOOOOO much for reviewing! Report Review
Great job! I luvd it! Sad...but a happy ending! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're so sweet! Report Review
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