7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Aimee MEETING

1st January 2006:
Please write more chapters i really want to know how Harry reacts to having a twin sister and how they all get on at Hogwarts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #2, by Ally MEETING

18th August 2005:
Great Story! PLease update!

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Review #3, by MeaghanPotter MEETING

25th April 2005:
WOW HARRY HAS A SISTER! great story so far but can you not put it in all capitals? sry but it hurts ma eyes

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Review #4, by shades_of_violet MEETING

25th April 2005:
okay, listen i'm POSITIVE it's a great story, but i have to say, It's WAY too hard to read. Capitals and no spacing is toooooo hard. so i read half, and that was it. Srry, but i'll read it if u change it. Sorry, but i had to say something.... ~~~Violet

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Review #5, by homerhiter MEETING

24th April 2005:
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Y R U TYPEIN IN CAPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #6, by Kitty17 MEETING

23rd April 2005:
Good start, you need to space you story out a bit and put it in lower case (Makes it easier to read)

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Review #7, by MaCHoGaL MEETING

23rd April 2005:
Um...As far as I can tell, your description for the most part is okay. A few suggestions, though. Number One: Don't type your stories in all caps, because it tends to get quite confusing. Number Two: Break up your paragraphs whenever you're changing subjects, or when new people begin to speak. Number Three: Add 'tags' after people talk, describing how they're saying things. It makes things much more interesting. Number Four: Try taking things a bit slower, because I really think you can make this an excellent fic!
br>For the most part, this is pretty good as your first fic. Just try working on the things I've mentioned and you should be just fine!

Nikkie

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