hey!! that was gr8!! pls write more cuz the ending was linda abrupt...but that was so kool!!Author's Response: I think I may write a corresponding one-shot that explains what happened in the end there, so watch for it! Thanks for the, as usual, wonderful review! :) Report Review
Honeslty, that was WAY too short, but it was so cute. This is the best You/Sirius story I have found here so far.
I absolutely loved the commentary between James and Lily. That is mostly how I imagine the last of their fights just before they get together. I think that before then they would have been more heated arguments, but in this context it was great.
Good job! Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I have been working on "you" type narration for awhile now, and it's nice to know its appreciated! Report Review
my friend and i are forever grateful, going to epilogue
AnnAuthor's Response: hope you like the epilogue! next to chapter three, it was a LOT of fun to write! :) Report Review
That was awsome, we kissed! going on to chapter six. My friend says you rule. don't ask.
AnnAuthor's Response: I won't ask, but will take the compliment. thank you, Ann's friend. :) Report Review
Darn it! Why did Lily have to come! WHY! Sorry, had to man.
AnnAuthor's Response: I don't know! Lily has peculiar timing! oh well... Report Review
Awww! I loved this chapter! My favorite part was this:
“My word is not enough?” He sounds surprised.
You shake your head. “You’re a brilliant liar, Black.”
You raise an eyebrow and glance briefly up at him. “That wasn’t a compliment.”
Going to chapter four. *squeels*
AnnAuthor's Response: it was one of my favorite to write! thanks for appreciating it!
What did he do? I don't even know what he did, to me! Well, on to chaptito numero tres.Author's Response: read on to find out... Report Review
Well, i finished chapter one, and I'm, like, already addicted. Your doing a great job. On to Chapter two . . .
AnnAuthor's Response: addiction can be interesting... Report Review
your story is absolutely great. good plot and story line. i think you should continue with a sequel up unto Sirius' passing. it would be great and i would definately read it.Author's Response: thank you sooo much for the compliment! I appreciate it! :) i shall indeed consider continuing with the story. It does intrigue me to see what happens with the my character and Sirius up until his passing. look for the sequel! I'll work on it and post a chapter soon! thanks again for reviewing! :) Report Review
I like your story... the only thing that bothered me, because I'm a dork like that and details are important to me is that Thanksgiving isn't celebrated in England... and I don't think Madame Pomfrey is old enough to have been the school nurse then. I really liked the plot though :) I thought it was really cuteAuthor's Response: I know abt Thanksgiving not being celebrated in England, but I was taking a creative liberty bc my character, Audrey, was from America (where we do celebrate the holiday) and as for Pomfrey not being the nurse...I just didn't want to come up with another name for the nurse. (*admits laziness, hides, comes out, grins*) thanks for the compliment, though! :) Report Review
lol!That was aweome! I've never read a Marauder story, but this was just great!!!I love the ending, given the fact everyone in the wizarding world knows about Lily and James eventually.That was awesome!!!2 thumbs up!Author's Response: Yea, I felt it necessary to focus only on the established characters (everyone can figure out Lily and James themselves) :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really liked this story. I luv sirius and me shippers. lol. great job!-blueAuthor's Response: thanks! i love writing these kinds of stories; they're fun! Report Review
Nice chapter.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Aw, Sirius was absolutely adorable here, despite being quite obviously hurt by the insults by the fire. Sigh. He's so fabulous, isn't he? :D It was so sweet how he stayed by her bedside, although (due to further sleep) there was lack of confrontation as to why he was there (and thus the further revealing of his true feelings has been postponed). Oh well; I'm relatively patient - I can wait. Overall, I loved the chapter. Update soon, please! :) WitcheryAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
It's interesting to the say the least. I can't think of anything that needs improvement, so keep up the good work. And you'd better update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! (of course I will, and have!) Report Review
i loved this chapter! cna't wait for the next one!!! :)Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Wow! I came across this story just today, and I absolutely love it! You have an amazing style of writing, and manage to move between various points of action without making the story seem rushed or stilted; I really like that. Sirius' confession here was majorly cute (He's my all-time favourite character). I'll definitely add this to my favourites list! :D Can't wait to keep reading, so please post as soon as you can, WitcheryAuthor's Response: what a lovely compliment! thank you soooo much! i luv sirius too, he's definitely on my fav characters list. and the fourth chapter should be up soon! Report Review
I really like it alotAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! I liked it too! :) Report Review
good startAuthor's Response: thanks so much for your input! i'm having such fun with this story and it's nice to know someone is enjoying it! Report Review
i like it! Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
I like this and im the first revierwer! whoop! anyways i like this and you should keep writing itAuthor's Response: thanks for the imput! i like it too and i'm putting up more very very soon! Report Review
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