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good, but could be longer.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I had very little time to write this story, because the last day to submit a story to the competition was so near and I was runnig out of ideas. Have to start earlier next time...

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Hehehe!

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this is a great story, but infortunately I have nothing to say for you to improve your writing, if that is what you want because I am not a good writer myself. well Good Luck with everything!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I appreciate every review very much. You don't have to have anything special to say, it's just nice to hear your opinnion. :)

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That was actually pretty good but you know when you said "resent" it's spelled R - E - C - E - N - T. Otherwise it was good.

Author's Response: Thanks for your advice.I have sometimes problems with spelling, because I'm from Finland and English is not my mother tongue...

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Same thoughts as lilfo, use " " it's kind of annoying seeing things like: - Who's there? she screamed it's kind of hard to see where it ends (well, not for me, but for idiots.) So i suggest usuing " "

Author's Response: I will. Thanks for the tip.

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very funny ! your writing is excellet, though you should use inverted commas ( " " )

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing ! I wll use inverted commas from now on.

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