{reviewid: 2113490, reviewer: 'uncle%20e'}
8th May 2009:
well surprise surprise! i don't normally read potter and have never completely watched a potter film. But it didn't take long to submerge myself in this chapter. The descriptive writing had me reading in accent and smelling steak and kidney pie. Most of all i would not hesitate to read chapter 2. cheers!
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{reviewid: 898198, reviewer: 'xAllxThexRagex'}
11th February 2006:
Hey this story is really really great! You're a good writer :) Please update soon <3
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{reviewid: 811924, reviewer: 'i%20love%20l%20%26%20j%204ever%2C%20lucky%20friday%2013'}
| Review #3, by i love l & j 4ever, lucky friday 13 | Chapter I |
14th December 2005:
I LOVE IT!
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{reviewid: 805973, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
11th December 2005:
Well, an intereesting start, but where is it going? And Lily seems a bit whiney, although I'm sure that was your intent, keep it up, adn thanks for writting, Ran
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{reviewid: 698887, reviewer: 'glacialangel'}
18th September 2005:
UPDATE SOON PLEZ CUZ IM LUVIN IT!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 497125, reviewer: 'JenetteBlack'}
11th May 2005:
MORGAN!!!!!!11111one!1two!!!!!!
OMG MORGAN I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU IN FOREVER!!!
I <3 this story, and I miss ya bunches!
::loads and LOADS of hugs::
x0X0
~Kelsey
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{reviewid: 494480, reviewer: 'krista'}
9th May 2005:
Good start. I like how all the Marauders and Lily and her friends. I hope they still have adventures in this story
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{reviewid: 477089, reviewer: 'LilyFlower23'}
26th April 2005:
i love it
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{reviewid: 474062, reviewer: 'padfoot_prongs6'}
23rd April 2005:
u never told me that u put this one up! bah ha! haha. well it's good. i want u to write more tho! ive read this before!!!! haha.
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{reviewid: 473838, reviewer: 'O%20Crazy%20One'}
23rd April 2005:
Oooo. This is good. You have a talent for writing. This fist chappy has captured me. Do you think you could update real soon because I love this story? I'll be checking in for updates. Kiss Kiss ;)
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{reviewid: 468840, reviewer: 'Wendy'}
19th April 2005:
I like it, but you should continue, and write more. Thanks for reading my review!
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{reviewid: 465206, reviewer: 'mimi'}
17th April 2005:
good beginning
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{reviewid: 464007, reviewer: 'Liz'}
17th April 2005:
That was good. I think it'll get better for me once there are more chapters...so I'll be waiting for the next update
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{reviewid: 463125, reviewer: 'mor10sen_luv'}
16th April 2005:
hehe, I love how you portray Lily in this story! I always thought she would be more of a drama queen than others portray her in their stories. Great job, really, I like it! Update soon! I just love being people's first reviewer for a story, especially when it's a good story! I just posted the first chapter for a J/L story too! Maybe you could read it, I dont' have any reviews for it either! Ok, I'm rambling now, sorry, I'm just friendly that's all. Well review ya later....
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