Awesome, you need to write more...or else....

Author's Response: Um...that's all there is. It was a one-shot.

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one word, COOL!

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I loved it!! You sure can write!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you check out the rest of my stuff. Oh, and I have an original fic over at fiction central under the same name.

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aww, that was beautifully written! i really liked that! thx so much for sharing it! =)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I hope you will read my chapter story, as this one shot was the starting ideas for it.

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Great!

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This was really good! You made the whole thing seem so real. it was almost as if i could just see some of the things happen. and how you made Remus so closed up, was good, i've read so many fanfic that just make Remus/James/Sirius/Peter automatic friends. and with Peter a lot of authors write him as a well something else i can't exactly explain it in words, at least you had a reason behind hte friendship, the folllower, yea i'm not making any sense even to myself. i got what i want to say in my head, just isn't coming out right writing it down. anyhow Great job on this.

Author's Response: Thank you! And welcome to my RPG forum, btw....I hope you check out my new chapter story about the marauders....actually, this story was the start of my chapter story.

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cute story! totally going on my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you'll read my chapter stories up too...and well, all of them. :D

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Yay! This doesn't seem like your other one-shots, but that's probably because it's not a songfic. Also, it seems more indepth, more thoughtful. I think I like this kind of writing better. So, just wondering, is it easier to write one-shots because they're shorter?

Author's Response: No, not easier, just fun once in a while. It gives me practice for my own fiction novel in the making.

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Winky: I is loving it! (hic) Dobby: I is (hic) Loving it too! The Drunk Elves is loving you! Keep up zee good work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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wow. that was beautifully written. please keep it up, start another fic, or something. you have a very nice writing style.

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't know if you'll get this, but I actually have more. Just check out my author's page.

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I like it, it's a bit short, but I like it all the same. Keep up the good work.

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Very good, I must say. Very nice, indeed. Great job! :D

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