wow that was... creepy. 10/10

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I've written a review for this story before, but it must have gotten deleted somehow. Anywhoo, I think it went something like this:

Wow. This story was incredible. I am stunned at how sad this story was, but also at how beautifully written it is, too. The whole aspect of the story was perfect from the dialogue to her last thoughts. And what an ending! The ending was completely fantastic, but utterly sad at the same time.

Great story. 1000/10-completely.

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Oh My God that was sad. It was just beautifully written. I can feel my self about to cry. It leaves such sorrowful beauty behind it. I love how Ron reacts and how you feel your heart clench. Wow.

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Wow. This was really good! I'll read all your other stories. =]

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...
wow.
Just. whoa.
INTENSENESS!
The only thing about it was a couple of tiny punctuation and stuff. (But I'm just insane about those things, so don't take me to seriously)
LOOVEIT. I started to tear up there.

Keep up good work!
~Krissy~

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WHAT!?! You can't leave me like that!!! All was silent?! Does that mean... no!

This was really good... if there were another chapter after it, I DEFINITELY would have kept reading!

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Is she dead? That was very...mysterious. It does not explain anything and is very confusing. otherwise, I like it. It would have been cool if you continued it with Ginny living. and you know, More of Harry's friends being picked off... and Ginny being confused as to why Harry stabbed her, and now comforting her. That would be awesome

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wow, this sent shiver down my spine towards the ending. fantastic and original, very well written! you have done an amazing job. I could feel everything ginny was feeling, and I adored how you wrote Ron - it was beautiful. 10/10, for sure! be proud over this piece :)

ps. it so goes in to my favs ;)
~Linnéa

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what an amazing story! i loved it!

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Aw, that was so sad! Great characterizations (bonus points for adding a minor death eater by the way) especially Ron's. I liked how this story seemed to have an EA Poe sort of feel (I was sort of expecting Dolohov to stuff her into an unused passage way) but then it grew more into a tragedy. I liked your writing style, it in itself seemed to reflect dying...you know what I mean? Great job.

9.5/10 stars

XxVampireXx

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How evil of you.

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o chilling...i have goosebumps.They were to late (tear). I liked it...very dark though but I suppose that's what adds to it. Nicely done

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This was such a great story. Very reasonable, realistic, and too the point. The only thing that I would have to suggest, is that you add more of her feelings towards Harry's betrayal (or at least the man who did it). If it happened to me, I know I would feel more angry, hurt, and confused than she let on. But that is my only suggestion. I loved everything else, and how Ron just had this brotherly feeling that something was wrong. Too bad he didn't get there in time. I would love it if you wrote a sequel showing Ron finding Ginny dead, everyone's feelings, including Harry's, and so on. If you ever do, please let me know. Great read. I loved it. =D

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Just awfully sad!
Poor Ginny, to die thinking that the one she loves has betrayed her. Painful!



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This was absolutely breathtaking. Wonderfully written. all the emotions came to their right and the strong bond between siblings. Lovely! Dark and angsty but still beautiful!

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That's so sad! It was really discritptive and I liked it, well not the death part, but the way it was written and how the characters acted. :o)

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aww... thats a sad/good death scene.

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aww.

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Wow! What a good death scene. I can say no more then that. Too bad that near the end through her pain, Ginny couldn't realize that it wasn't Harry. She died thinking he had killed her, though.


Because in that case she could have been thinking that by dying she had betrayed Harry. A ten of course.

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Oh my God, that was so sad. You really wrote it very well, Faymos. Especially the part where you have the trio in italics. If it was me, I'd probably have inserted a line break again and again *eye roll* Overall, very nicely written. Your descriptions were almost perfect as well. Good work :)

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Aw.
That was so sad it had me in tears. Wow. Incredibly moving, amazing work there. Wow. I'm at a loss for words, honestly. *sniffles*
Amazing job. 10/10

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Wow!
That was so beautiful and so, so sad!
Ginny died thinking Harry had betrayed him, this is one of the few stroies on HPFF that has made me cry.
Wow, I'm pretty much speechless.

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Wow. That was really moving. Well written and good idea.

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I'm almost laughing because that was so unbelievably sad. Is that even possible?

Wow, what a great story. Truly a winner, here. That's so so sad. She died thinking that the man she loved had killed her. Ouch.

And it was a physically painful death too... double ouch.

I really don't know what to say. 100/10. That was so great.

Oh, and your banner just completes it all. I love the colors.

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omg.....sad

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