{reviewid: 2782223, reviewer: 'jayman1744'}
16th April 2013:
hah great idea to have all the girls who all liked him under one roof lol i loved it great job
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{reviewid: 2763258, reviewer: 'blackdragonfox'}
10th January 2013:
thats one of the best storys i have read
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{reviewid: 2755993, reviewer: 'Wolf25'}
3rd December 2012:
It's been a while since I have read this series(about two years now) of stories they are still some of the best ones I have read and some of my favorites glad to hear that you still continuing to write on them please keep them coming your stories are the best.
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{reviewid: 2561914, reviewer: 'unknown'}
5th August 2011:
You my friend, are a fucking legend.
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{reviewid: 2440013, reviewer: 'joelfong123'}
25th November 2010:
I only have one word to say: Amazing.
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{reviewid: 2430535, reviewer: 'Karl'}
1st November 2010:
Bloody brilliant storyt! But I hate you for ending it like that. Was really feeling the whole Harry hermione thing..
Can't wait to start reading the next book..
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{reviewid: 2426841, reviewer: 'jamie'}
23rd October 2010:
okay i've fnished your story so thats praise in itself. I admit, i found it kinda frustrating when you wouldn't really explain Harrys powers but a good 8/10
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{reviewid: 2422919, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
11th October 2010:
fuckin finally im serious after the damn cock blocks and intimate moments ruined by her parents he is finally seeing his true feeling for mione to bad he still got cock blocked again and twice in the same day damn i would be pissed off to no end you get a 10 of 10 for the audacity of making me wait this long for their first meaningful kiss
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{reviewid: 2269577, reviewer: 'blackthoughtsredwriting'}
18th December 2009:
You're first chapter has intrigued me. It has made me want to read more =] I shall definately do so =]
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{reviewid: 2261619, reviewer: 'CJ'}
2nd December 2009:
Good story, i thurrally enjoyd it from start to finnish - Thank You
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{reviewid: 2249646, reviewer: 'Myrak%20the%20Slytherin'}
5th November 2009:
That was brilliant! I'm hooked lol
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{reviewid: 2243955, reviewer: 'blink182'}
26th October 2009:
The best chapter yet! Thanks for sharing! Please keep writing
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{reviewid: 2243543, reviewer: 'blink182'}
26th October 2009:
WOW! What an ending! simply stunning
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{reviewid: 2243533, reviewer: 'blink182'}
26th October 2009:
This story is a amazing! Thank you for writing it.
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{reviewid: 2243527, reviewer: 'blink182'}
26th October 2009:
Brilliant! I look foward to reading your entire series. This was a great start to what i'm sure is a great series. Thank you for sharing your writing.
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{reviewid: 2217220, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
Spelling
Honour is supposed to be honor
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{reviewid: 2217202, reviewer: 'Awesomeness%20is%20u'}
14th September 2009:
This is mah 2nd readthru of this and it's still awesome
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{reviewid: 2217137, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
More grammar problems.
as he Cho was still within earshot
resting her head against he shoulder.
Doing what was natural he took on of her hands into his, holding her close.
hear heartbeat strong against his.
Author's Response: Surprised your still enjoying it? Lol. I see you've read quite a bit. Congraulations, you are now an official Legacies fan.
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{reviewid: 2217073, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
Yet more grammar and a wrong word
Court session of the 27 July is now in order (grammar)
Court would next be in session in one hour (grammar)
Draco’s eyes flared a Demonic read (wrong word read should be red)
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{reviewid: 2217012, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
more grammar and spelling problems
it was closing in on half one
she knew he was losing him.
Hear what, I want to make it up to you.
Wannagotoapartyon Sunday?
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{reviewid: 2216868, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
grammar and spelling
Hullo should be hello
thye should be they
and I have no idea what this is.
(she noticed that did he let go of the sword hidden under that black cloth)
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{reviewid: 2216838, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
Grammar
So you want me actually to use this
should be
So you want me to actually use this
Author's Response: The Concise dictionary ain't got nothin on you, man. keep doing your thang , homie.
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{reviewid: 2216669, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
No one else was Grimmauld Place except Moody
should be
No one else was in Grimmauld Place except Moody
Author's Response: Damn homie, in high school you were the MAN, homie
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{reviewid: 2216660, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
Grammar again
No one else was Grimmauld Place except Moody
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{reviewid: 2216644, reviewer: 'Paul'}
14th September 2009:
More grammar, ebonics and spelling problems
openly her blossoming body (grammar)
She wanted to take care for him (spelling should be of and not for)
There are be people everywhere, (grammar, ebonics)
metre (spelling should be meters)
Please go back to school and learn how to use proper english.
Author's Response: I'm trying to conjugate some verbs at this very moment. Hopefully I won't get lines if I do badly at my end of week test. I'm trying very hard to fit in these tiny desks though, I'll ask my class teacher to let me sit on the stool in the corner. Ebonics? Its a typo smarty pants. I'm going to tell on you! Nya nya
Metre is also correct. Look it up, bruh.
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