Brilliant. Carry one cuz im a sucker for a romantic story

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I think it's pretty romantic. But does Ginny still like Harry? If that happens, it'll be a competition between Ginny and Hermione for the sake of Harry's love. I certainly loved the part where they both said 'I love you' into the air. It was so romantic. Plz write more!

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It's okay. I hope u update soon. :D

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Awwww, this was so cute and sweet! Please keep it up and update soon!

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:O. this chapter! it's so. dramatic. and yeah. aw, i love the part where they both whisper 'i love you' into the air! so sweet. <3 kelsie and i can't wait until the fourth chapter ;3 [though she was all 'what's with all this mushy stuff?!' lmao! she still loves the story tho]

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nice start please continue soon luv sophie

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LUCY! it's reallyreally good m'kay! i have no suggestions.. like, at all. seriously, it's that good. i don't think i'd ever be able to write like that oO; i do know that i want to read more of your writing now though! hehe. <33

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Okay first of all this is not a one-shot fics. A proper one-shot has only one chapter therefore this is not a one-shot and should not be in this section. Second you really should seperate the story into paragraphs to make it easier to read. Third you didn`t really explain what is going on well. Personly I think you should re-write this chapter. Add more details, seperate it into paragraphs, and explain yourself better. Also move this to the regular H/Hr section. This is a really good start and if you fix the things I mentioned it would be amazing. Update soon I will be following your story!

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